| "Under Anothers Watchful Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 24, 2004 03:21 CDT
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yay, an update! well.... back to waiting for the next one....
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 12:51 CDT
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you have a beautiful flow of your words in this chapter. very very good job. good that Kagome remembers...now to kill the voice in her mind. lol. excellent and update soon. :-)
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:43 CDT
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I never shut up, do I? -_-;; *sigh* UPDATE SOON!....or else AHAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAH!...KAGOME LOST HER MEMORY.....ouch my head is spinng in confusion of trying to remember which fic is fic @_@.....well....great fic....keep UPDATING...i hope Kagome gets her memory back otherwise...I WILL TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB *eyes burning with fire and rage*....Kagome shouldnt forget Inuyasha ever!.....what has happened to you lately....have you lost your memory too?!?!....am i alone in this world?!?!?!?1......i am so damn confused!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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the story is comming along wonderfully. you have such a great grasp as to character definition and character motivation. great plot interventions and great job overall. i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black offline On: September 28, 2004 15:20 CDT
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great chapter!!!!!! O.O but you can't just stop there!!!! you're soooo mean ; . ; Update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Great chapter. Poor Kagome to have to go through that. Whats going to happen next to Kagome? Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:36 CDT
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oooo Sango and Miroku sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G, LoL i love your fic. UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: September 22, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Wonderful chapter. This story is going great, but I have a feeling that thats going to change. I wonder whats going to happen next. Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: anime fan On: September 20, 2004 01:41 CDT
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good story, i want more chapters. i'll check again in a few days. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: me On: September 19, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic....very interesting plot...I really can't wait to read more! This is definately going in my favorites list...right now! haha. Good job and enjoy writing more...I'll be waiting eagerly(and not patiently:P) to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and you almost had me when Kagome was going to leave. Who is the person watching? Is Kikyo and this watcher person working together? Whats going on? Whats going to happen? I'll be adding this to my favorites ^__^ Keep up the great writing ^__^
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAY Inuyasha and Kagome are finally together, and your fic sounds excactly like the anime but yet it doesnt, well thats one reason why its soo perfectly done. UPDATE SOON?!?!?!?!, i hope matt doesnt hate my guts, ehh forget the matt thing, hehehe ^_^;
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 09:34 CDT
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UPDATE SOON MY FRIEND, i love your fic ~_^.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hm... perhaps Kikyo and this mysterious figure are working together? Hm, it's more than likely.... Reveal who that figure is soon... or I shall set Miroku upon you! Heh... the plushie that is... ^.^;; Great story! I enjoy reading it.... Are you going to include any Miroku/Sango fluff or are you going to focus mainly on Inuyasha and Kagome?
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