| "Under Anothers Watchful Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: please write more
Reviewed By: jupiterangel666 On: March 17, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic so far. i've only read till 23 but i've enjoyed it to no end.please hurry and write more. thankyou!!!!
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Title: another great job
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its me again ^.^ how is that family thing? hope it is all better now. anyways, good chappie. update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit On: February 21, 2005 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great. its really starting to get interesting. hurry and update fast PLEASE!!!!
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Title: another good job!
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:18 CST
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way to go. i'm sorry about whatever the family emergency was. it sounds ominous. hope all is well now. i'm glad you finally updated. hope the next time you update it is sooner. btw- the way you discribed the ending of this fic, worries me :S
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Reviewed By: lover of obvious couples On: January 24, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!! I hope we free kagura too.....and how is kagome going to find inuyasha without narku picking up her scent? so many questions @_@ I hope you update real soon ^-^ also if u want confuzzeld_mind@yahoo.com is my e-mail chat or whatever! *please no spam and rude remarks thank you*
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 13:30 CST
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*smashes kikyo w/ large hammer* haha! love ur story update asap kk? u do & we all b happy. *continues 2 smash pieces of kikyo in2 smaller pieces w/ hammer while laughing maniacally* muahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: December 05, 2004 23:49 CST
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AGH!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! that clay pot really needs to be smashed...pronto. come on inu-boy, open your damn eyes. that was always one thing i hated about Kikyo (and still avidly do), she so wants to drag him to hell with her but hey, they both got a second chance at life, she's the one runnign around with a butcher knife in her sleeve waiting for the right time to stab him in the heart...again...for the bilgilonth time. GRRRR.....update soon and if you can't tell, excellent addition to the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: November 29, 2004 13:09 CST
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great addition to the story.so cute those two are. you had me worried for a moment about inuyasha and living with the wounds, but as always, bakayasha recovered. keep it up, the story is comming along great.
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Title: WOW!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh your storey is amazing,there were some minor spelling errors like gental...it's spelt gentle...but your writing style and creativiy is outstanding....I encourage you to continue with your storey!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story!!!! I sat up most of the night reading. I hope you get a chance to update soon! I am dying, please!!!
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
keep it going gurl
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 22:24 CST
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this chapter had some absoutly beautiful words in it. the way you knitted the sentences together...marverlous. they flew together in such a beautiful way. awsome. brought a tear to my eye, honest. :-)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 13:02 CDT
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good update, i was a little thrown by the chapter before this one, it was kind of random but definatly a great update. awww. :-) keep it going, good job.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just found this fic and I gotta say I wish I had found it sooner, its such a wonderful heartwarming and at the same time heart wrenching story.... I just love it!!! I hope to be able to read more soon, and I can't wait to see how everything turns out... eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 00:57 CDT
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I've been reading this story for a while and I really like it. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon!
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