| "To Protect..." Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: please
Reviewed By: hineee22121 On: March 17, 2006 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
look this is taking for ever this is shiroi hana lover of hiei here and i would like to say.... HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please! so many exclamation marks ne!?
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome begining,it so had me. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: hiei's mate On: January 29, 2006 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update for the pairings you shold have it a sesshomaru/kagome/hiei and a tohru/ kyo or hatori
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: January 24, 2006 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
i meant chapter 8.. whoops.. my long review was cut off!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: January 24, 2006 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
whoa. Chapter 10 was cool... i forgot the word >
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Title: great
Reviewed By: fluffyschick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great revise please write more when u can bb4n
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its still interesting no matter what. But please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sexysesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! I don't care who kagome goes with as long as it isn't hiei, there's too many of those, and for tohru, I say she should go with kyo. This fanfic is really sad and depressing... so update soon!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't really care who kagome goes with, most of the ones you write are really good so i want to leave the pairing to your choice. also, i don't really like tohru or hate her either, i just don't like her with yuki... whatever, i just want to say the is a great fic and can't wait for the next update! although, i do hope the update is sooner than later...
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 14:52 CST
Comment/Review:
dont worry about that bitch/bastard who wrote that review it takes one asshole to ruin it for others but so many other (like me) wants you to hurry up and update!
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Reviewed By: Mukuro Meki On: July 29, 2005 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
put Tohru with Kyo (here kitty kitty kitty) and Kagome's other with Hiei please
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Title: Plz
Reviewed By: Miriel On: April 18, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! That is sooooo good. Please hurry up and write some more.
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Title: Pretty Please
Reviewed By: yuni On: April 04, 2005 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and write another chapter. This is sooooooo cool! Write some more Pretty Plz with a cherry on top!?
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Reviewed By: yuni On: March 14, 2005 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im so glad you wrote more. im so happy. That was really sad.
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Reviewed By: yuni On: February 18, 2005 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! im so glad that you wrote more. i love this fanfic. please write more
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