| "Troubled Waters" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Cheruubi On: September 10, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! CONTINUE IT ALREADY!! grrrrr! lol thats how good it is^^ but pls continue it, I can't wait to read moreXD Cheruubi
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Reviewed By: imbri On: April 20, 2005 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
shibby fic. only reason its not more fun to read is because its not finished. but i love it, still. keep up the good work and update soon!!! ^_^ love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Carol D. On: November 21, 2004 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vidalark, hey! *waves* So...when's the next chapter? I wanna know what happens with the cubs. *hehe* And to see if anymore lemons occure :D Hm, and are there anymore unsavory family members of D's hanging around? Oh yeah and does Leon ever get to meen Sofu D or at least understand Q-chan? So many questions! Oh yeah and how'll leon deal with being eternal when he's working on the police force? Won't he have to leave that after some time? Anyway, I hope you keep writing and soon *whine and teary puppy eyes* I'll even bribe you with a vast amount of chocolate. ^.^V
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Reviewed By: karin On: November 01, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
need spell check love story beyond all reason so please right more
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Title: Yummeh fic =D
Reviewed By: Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chappie. *lurves D/L lemons* =3 Hope you write soon! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Odango On: October 10, 2004 21:42 CDT
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Hi! I haven't revieweb yet, but I wanted to let you know that I really like your story. I just finished reading both parts and I can't wait to see what you post next! ^__^
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Hells Librarian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! A sequel! Keep on writing. I love your fiction! XD
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Title: It's getting better . . . !
Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 02:40 CDT
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O~kay I knew this was going into the right direction the minute Leon made that comment about handcuffs and D enjoying the idea. (snicker, snicker) Hell, I was even surprised (and thrilled) by the possibility of violence when Heero, Seki and T-chan all decided to sign up as his guardians. What do those cubs want from Leon anyway?? Hmm . . . most intriguing. Of course that heading "Warning LEMON" also got me hopping for joy. It was like "FINALLY the GOOD STUFF!" However, next time I'll be sure to skip all that plot filler and jump straight into the juicy part. I mean what kind of hentai onna would I be if I just concentrated on the plot? ^___~ Well, good job and I'll be looking forward to the rest . . . not to mention any more possible LEMONS!!! *o* Woo-hoo!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: CountD's Special Pet On: September 16, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks at works 'To be contined' WHAT!?!?!?! What do you think your doing to me?? *Anime tears running down face* Where is the rest?!?!? YOu better give me a lemon to make me happy in the next chapter. I swear!! If you don't I'll............................have to wait!!! Thats really sad!!! I don't wanna wait. Why didn't you write more!?!?! I read all your last one and waited so long for this one. Now you stop. how dare you? Don't you care how much I look forward to your chapters. that they are my one and only joy in life besides all the other stuff that brings me joy. I can't beleive this story is so good and great and perfect and cool and well written, and awesome, and the best sotry ever Ok I was trying to use all the space but I don't want to know that I have tried but the story was great.
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Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 17:04 CDT
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And so it begins! Part two of the lemony goodness . . .! Woo-hoo! Yipee! . . . What do you mean there was only one scene of nudity? . . . AND NO SEX?!!! What kind of sequel is this??? Oh . . . one that actually DOES require a plot. Fine. I guess it couldn't be called a story otherwise. ^___^ So I guess I should comment on how interesting the interaction between Totetsu and Leon was along with that little conversation between those two "creatures" desiring to meet "him". Leaves a some intrigue as far as wondering what's going to happen next. So keep up the good work . . . and hurry up already!!!
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 08, 2004 18:01 CDT
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thank you! i totally enjoyed troubled times and this is a good begining to a sequal. keep it up!! have a rose @---^--
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Title: Yea!!!
Reviewed By: Chaosdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yea! A sequel! Yea again! I sooooooo love D/Leon fics. There is so much emotion between them in the manga I'm ready to yell at D to 'give him a big kiss!' Keep up the awesome work! I'll be looking forward to more wonderful entertainment. -Chaosdreamer
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