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Title: pookymoni
Reviewed By: pookymoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was great,maybe a little short.I thought it was still good. Please write more stories I'm trying to work on one now but I don't know when I'll start posting it.
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Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute! I like how you've used Kagome's voice and reasoned out her thoughts and feelings! It could be said that it should be longer but in all honesty, even a short fic has its good points! I'd love to read more from you. I know you're busy with all your 'schtuff'... but taking time to write a bit is cathartic . . . and something that I think you show a very good sense of writing as well as humor (as shown in Crushed)... LoL! Keep it up! ~Sueric~
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