| "Yes My Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:57 CST
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Great! Do more! PLEASE sad puppy face This fic is pretty average but took some skill to write. But hey I'm an average writer myself, and you should definitely write your own style and not listen to others that just don't give any contructive advice/criticism (your pic). Keep up the good writing:)
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Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:03 CST
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another smut!! another smut!! >.< loved the story
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Reviewed By: Sango81 On: February 23, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i really liked it.. especially Miroku bein into S and M... love it when he and sango hook it up... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:47 CST
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whoa...that was good.
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Reviewed By: a1k0 chan On: February 21, 2005 01:07 CST
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Aishiteru means I Love you.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 10:06 CST
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You naughty boy! When I first started reading, I'll confess that I was worried about Kagome being OC with the whole S&M scenario. I've seen that thing done in other stories before, and honestly never think it works well no matter what the skill level of the author is. I can believe a dominant Inuyasha, just b/c he's half youkai and has an aggressive personality...but Kagome as we know her in the anime and manga can easily be made OC when people try to put her in aggressive sexual roles. I think you did a good job with pulling off a "was it a dream or not?" feel, which can be hard to do. I think you had some very overcritical reviews left for you. Please don't be discouraged by negative reviewers. Not everyone can be a Sueric, Terri Botta, or Del Kaidin (obviously some of my fave fanfic writers) nor should we try to be. We're all at different levels in writing and every story gives us a chance to experiment more with technique and content. Your story is YOUR own. You have every right to tell a tale the way you see fit. Take what you want from your reviews and don't let any overly judgemental comments discourage you. :)
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Title: Yes My Mistress
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 14:20 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end? Pretty crappy ending if you ask me. I dunno, in your author note, you said that it was the intended ending, but that was not a proper way to end a story. You said you might write something more, but that wasn't for sure. I just thought it could be ended better that's all. It was a pretty good story. Not great, just pretty good. There was just something about the story line that I didn't like so much. A few too many twists that just didn't make sense to me. Also, what bugged me was your continous updates without actually adding a new chapter. That just screamed to me that you were begging for reviews and/or visits by using "editing" as a guise. I mean, if you REALLY had to edit, you could have done it in the end. I really hate it when authors do that. But anyway, in my opinion, you're a pretty good writer. You've got good grammar for which I am very thankful. There are sooo many authors out there that have grammar that stinks as badly as... I don't know what. Well, I thought this fic was okay. I'm not crazy about it, but that's just my opinion. I'm sure there are many more out there who love it, but I'm just giving my imput. I hope you write some mroe though (not necessarily along this story line). I'd be interested in seeing what else you've got. ~cattykit~
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue.... or something... make a sequel? I don't care just do something!
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Title: PWEEEEEEEEEEEZE
Reviewed By: KaloBagh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!!!! YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE YOUR ARE KILLING ME..... ~Friends look over and aim for the phone calling phyciatric center.......~ at least send me a next chapter T-T
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Title: aw that's the end
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: December 10, 2004 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was just too funny. Poor inuyasha was all lied too and all. Yet everything worked out okay in the end and that's what counts. I can't wait for you're next story! Till then bye.
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Reviewed By: rawben On: December 07, 2004 18:48 CST
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yey! nice story! but what about miroku/sango? that line about how sango would kill him if he ever did that... you could go places. :P
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Title: oOoOoOoOo
Reviewed By: Rain~*~ On: December 05, 2004 23:12 CST
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i looove surprises....lil inus..so kawaii ^.^
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 21:13 CST
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O_o You jerk! Make a secuel PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU! TT_TT That sucks what a cliffe ending!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! ^_^
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