| "Yes My Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: psh_sh_h On: December 05, 2004 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O SURPRISE!!!! me juss lubb surprises!! ooohhh kagome-kagome-kagome-chan is pre-pre-pregnate!! ooohhhh i lub lemons too~! >.< ima so perverted..
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Please! Please!Please! i'm dieing to know what the suprise is! please add it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: December 04, 2004 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Little Inus running around. Good image huh? lol! Great! Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read your story and I think it was pretty interesting, what a cliffy you got there. I hated when that happened. It keeps you in the edge of your seat wondering what the hell is going to happen next. Please continue with the story.
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Title: WHAT????
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT???? no u cant end it with that i think this story could not use a sequel i want to know more about this 'PUP' please please consider a sequeal
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 04, 2004 03:16 CST
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will you give us a surprise if we only give you fourty reveiws? i loved that story!!! can you please write a sequel? please????? *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an idea, how about that was kagome's dream and in the next one they find out that their both dreaming the same dream (almost) and just say they love each other...well you can take it from there ^_~ update please!
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Title: LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Kagome lied about fucking Inu-yasha that way! Then Inu-yasha trys and pay back. I can't wait till you write the next chappie. Maybe what Inu-yasha did to her was a dream. OMG!!! I can't wait! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: ::shakes head::
Reviewed By: Jasi On: November 23, 2004 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really REALLY pathetic. You need to read a few more lemons to see how it is really done. Like...try chapter 30 of theMaven's In A Different Light. It will teach you a thing or too. I think you write as if you are in middle school. Give yourself a little more practice before you publish on a mayjor webstite like this.
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Title: She lied!
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know she did. I demand another chapter for this!
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Reviewed By: :D On: November 19, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was realli kewl cept i dunt get one part.... How could kagome-chan kno if she was his 'mistress' if it was just a dream and inuyasha never told her da full thing bout his dream right???? PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been waaaaaay to long since I got to read a fanfic (almost 2 months), but thats my computer for you. Actually, despite what some of the others said, I thought that was quite original. Cant wait for the 3rd chapter. Do something a little different though.
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol good second chapter! ^_^ and yes do another chapter but dont do the same thing, and i was right! it was a dream! and ya you gotta love last minute twists! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 11:31 CST
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O_o wow COOL I bet Inuyasha engoyed all that hehehe. Your right girls will act like that if you ignore them aneway. Great srotey update!
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: November 16, 2004 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the twist!! Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
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