| "Thick Brows" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is okay, but the white lines between are a little annoying... But I like the story very much....
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: satsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aarrg!!! please update this is like one of my favorite storys!!! ahaha i have been waiting forever!! its soo good you have to !!!! ahaha please please please please ahaha
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Reviewed By: Confetti [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, even though I'm more of a yaoi person! One little bit of advise, when writing male/male sex scenes, one very important thing to remember... ninjas or no, they need lubrication! if not then it would be very, very painful!! as long as you remember that everything is good! Keep writing! I hope my advice was useful to you!
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Title: FINALLY!
Reviewed By: Karista N On: May 20, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO glad I found this fic again and can finally give it a proper review! This is an amazingly well done piece, it captures their personalities just perfectly while still allowing a good amount of spice through to keep things interesting. It made me love Lee even more, and stop hating Sakura as much.
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: TobySeer On: May 09, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. New. It had the traditonal S/N thing but it was why Sakura and Lee worked out. Made sense to me.
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Reviewed By: darkarchonisme On: March 28, 2005 02:42 CST
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er, if i didn't get around to saying it, and the rating weren't evidence enough, this was a pretty good story. much kudos and props and what have ye. also w00tage. (also: zomg! before this little caption, I had 1337 characters left in the post! from the period at w00tage. hehe)
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Reviewed By: darkarch On: March 27, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hoo-ah. I'll try to give you a little help here, as I am a guy. (gasp!) the thing is, 99% of all the authors and fans of yoai are. . . high school aged girls. this is agrend that scares me, and a lot of my bi and gay friends. we jsut don't like yoai. and the whole bishounen thing is also, ENTIRELY female driven. what is with all you crazy girls and GAY guys? thye are not interested in you, and while yes, they can be oh so sweet and tender, apparently more so than purely straight relationships, but really now, what is with that obsession? you are girls. I like girls, I like guys, but the vast majority of yaoi is just. . . off kilter somehow, in a way that I just can't explain. I'm sorry I couldn't help you a terrible lot, but maybe that'll help a bit?
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Title: Gasp!
Reviewed By: Hotaru chan On: March 10, 2005 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Wow wow wow. One of the best fanfics I've read, by far. I'm in love. I wish I was Sakura... I love Lee. >,> One suggestion I have is to say 'blushed' and 'flushed' less, like say, 'color came to her cheeks' or something like that. But thats not a big deal, really. If your wondering why I gave you a nine, its because I never give tens: Nothings perfect! But it was pretty damn close! :hugs you: Write more Lee fics! Please! ^^
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Reviewed By: dragontwo On: February 28, 2005 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this fic, especially how Lee is portrayed. His good-boy persona is in character but not over the top. I like the part where he apologized for his wandering hand while they were kissing. I found it interesting that Lee was so guilty about touching with his hands, yet was so enthusiastic about kissing. Somehow, it seems such a realistic 'Lee thing' to be, to me anyways. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: vss On: January 28, 2005 16:20 CST
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(v son sayian logged off--I'm too lazy to log on) ooooo nice fic, ^___________________^ yays for lee and sakura!!! (man I love this pairing but there's not much of it out there) awsome job on the fic!! I'll definately be awaiting your next update (lol, you've also gotten me to like the naruto/sasuke and iruka/kakashi pairings)
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Title: !!
Reviewed By: satsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg i love this story! update!!!plz plz plz
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Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 08:01 CDT
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For some weird reason, I couldn't access AFFN so here I am. ^_^ Great chapter. I really loved the baggy-eyed morning. ^o^ I just wanted to huggle poor Kakashi-sensei. One thing I really want to see more of... I want to read about how sexy Iruka-sensei's hair is down. :P Yes I am obsessed with that man. LOL! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 18:19 CDT
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oh yeah, the lemons....gherific! good job, i love how sakura's handling lee, she's not irritating at all in this fic! very believable and just uber cute. rock on!
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Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ oh i laughed aloud when i read sasuke doesn't play for the right team. giggle city. anyhoo, dropping a review before i read too much and forget to. so far its been pretty interesting and believeable as far as sakura is concerned! ...okay back to reading more
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