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Reviewed By: sailorunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh! keep it up! just gotta work on you writing just a tiny bit. you're putting quotation marks around entire sentences in cluding the breaks like for example: "That's what I'm here for Connie said. I'm here to help" Try: "That's what I'm here for," Connie said. "I'm here to help." Not flaming...just giving u a tip. Keep it up though! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: angelsere [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that you do plan to update on this story. It is really good and I can't wait to find out what happen next. Please continue this story.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: blackcat99955 On: March 06, 2005 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story i cant wate to find out what happens to usagi please do a 3rd chapter the 1st to a great so please update
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Title: i have an idea
Reviewed By: Satans homeboy On: November 18, 2004 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey listen great story but i have a little idea for u now i dont know if u will support it but i think that the idea of connie and usagi getting together would be very good, save her from the guy and they get close. im not asking for hardcore porn, just u know a little affection to show they are together and dont kill her off. its just a suggestion if u dont like it dont be offended i just think it would definetly be a hell of a plot twist, ya know. o and uh some drugs would be nice, not weed, but um how about some coke? just a suggestion as one writer to the next. hope u write more bro. hit me back at leviathan892003@yahoo.com k peace im out.
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