Title: cool story
Reviewed By: kodoku na kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you gonna update it??? >makes puppy face<
I really hope u do... I liked a lot this story, it was about the second or third fic from naruto that I read and I just loved it! I loved how you put naruto together with hinata, they're so cute!!! and it's even more cute his friendship with sakura!!! you're also really funny, I've had good laughs while reading this! specially in the part when naruto draws sakura on the dirt and sasuke thinks about murdering him and dumping the body some place.... and also that scene when ino is filling a pillow with heavy stuff and toilet paper... LOL!! and I TOTALLY agree with "jennifer luvs fluffy" (from above! ^_^), it's REALLY hard to find a cool het fic!! so, I really, really, REALLY (hehe, u got the point!) hope u'll update this soon!!! can't wait! =)))
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