| "Shinigami's Lover Five" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 20, 2005 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It was so cute the way Wufei found Mi Lee. I'm glad he's getting someone; he deserves it. I love 1x2's and the way you characterise Duo is awesome.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 20, 2005 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes this is great thanks
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Reviewed By: Kix(not signed in right now) On: February 20, 2005 17:25 CST
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Do i sence a side story??
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Reviewed By: priscel** On: November 15, 2004 19:25 CST
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Go duo! he saved them and gee... heero left some skin behind *shivers* that's alittle unnerving. *smirks at the sweet ending of this chapter*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 15, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great I really love this story ...Duo saved the day again ..So cool!!!I can't wait till the next chapter..I hope you keep going with this story.I really would like to read more..Update again soon so I can find out how they rebiuld the house...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 23, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say this is the best story on the net... I just love it and want to read more so please update soon...Your stories just keep geting better and better...
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Reviewed By: priscel *sighs* On: October 22, 2004 16:00 CDT
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Well written and beautifully sentimental chapter. * here's "the power of love song".. which one she doesn't recall* wow... Duo revealed alot just then, so are they going to stay at Wufei's for a while *snickers evilly as sexy images flit through her mind* oh yea accidenial shower glimpses, toplessness...ok i'm calming down, yes i'm a hentai, i know. Update soon!!
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: October 22, 2004 13:29 CDT
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'you're smarter than I am.... sometimes. You can make me feel... so not worth it." ' ha duo still being a bastard, but man if I had heero I don't think that I would feel worthless, had ex that made me feel that way, if I had heero I'd feel very much appreciated. Heero is very good for Duo, he stablizes him... yin/yang. But still Duo's very inconsiderate at what he's putting heero through (he can't help it i know, i wish there was a way i could help him pull himself together, Heero needs him just as much I think he has burried the issues with his rape deep inside and that can't be good - he just keeps giving so much to Duo, so very much *shakes her head*), I would feel so hurt to see fear in his eyes when i lost it... To know that i'm the very reason for his careful torches and the fear in depths of those beautiful eyes and know that i'm the cause of it - at the same time recognize that he's still there, with him... this more than anything means he worth it all. MAn they are going to have hell getting Duo out... ANd Wufei I coud kiss him!! What a guy! Onward!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 01, 2004 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've Enjoyed reading this chapter please update.......
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 19:22 CDT
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Heero has to be my favourite character in this fanfic because he loves Duo so much and he has so much patience with him that it's sweet. I don't think that I would be able to be that patient with someone unless I took breaks from them every once in a while to go and punch something lol.. but I guess that just proves that Heero is a better person *sniffles* lolol I'm just waiting for the storm to hit ...I don't think that Duo's going to be happy about having to leave his house without getting everything that he wanted to bring with them. *shakes her head* poor Heero has the task of trying to get Duo out of the house. *nods* that's not going to be fun I'm glad that Wufei is a good enough friend to want to risk his life to make sure that Duo and Heero is safe. Then again it did seem like in one of the past stories like Wufei like Heero more than that ^^ so maybe that had something to do with that. lol Well can't wait to see the next chapter...this is an awesome fanfic ^^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: priscel--- 'nuf said [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 09:06 CDT
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*glomps Kracken and squeals* YAAAAAAAA! Part 5! PArt V!! Thank you so much!! I'm so happy that Duo's better but the threat of lossing the house that he and his love have made their home will defiantly upset his forward progress. hmm Wuffers seems a bit more distant than in part iv, especially at the end but it makes sense since Duo has more then likely forgiven him or atleast to the extent that Wuffers doesn't have to grovel *snickers* and what's with people listening in and watching them at the office?! That's not fair, they should have some semblance of privacy/private moments at the office. Have they spoken to Une? Do they fear that prehaps they woould be thought paranoid for bringing this up? Were they expecting it because of the attention the board gave them and the threat they had to dispatch at the same time and are hoping that eventually the interest in the pilots three will die down? Hmm that kind of attention I think would make me feel uncomfortable and wary of my business associates... 'kay i've talked your ear off enough in this review, Thank you and can't wait for more! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:50 CDT
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I'm so glad you are giving us more of Shinigani's Lover. I totally understand not wanting to leave the security of one's own home. I can hardly wait for the fireworks. Heero has the patience of a saint.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 17:57 CDT
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Wheee! Another Shini Lover! I'm guessing your own crash with storms will fuel this :) Duo's obsession with staying with his house makes sense, as does Heero's own more down-to-earth approach of, 'we can't weather a real bad one, better make plans'. Both very IC for the Shini arc. I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 09, 2004 02:35 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok well I have to make this short because I'm off to Dallas children's Hospital again with Jillian..My 16 years old daughter so I just wanted to let you know I read your chapter and or update or story and enjoyed them very much!!! ... You see I had 27 chapters to read and review so I'm doing a mass review because I have to go back to Dallas. So Please update and I will read your next chapter and or update or story when I return from Dallas.And thanks for updating..Patty 40
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: September 09, 2004 01:29 CDT
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Excellent! Real life experiences make for excellent reading. Glad your home made it through all right. I'm hoping the next system lessens to nothing more than a thunder storm. Well, we can hope. As always, I'm glad to see the misadventures of these two continue.
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