| "Shadows Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 04:49 CST
Comment/Review:
THis is a wonderful fan fic! though vampire cross overs aren't that origanal (I love them anyways) you seem to have given them a new twist this time... There's only one thing that bugs me... Miroku warmed up the blood in the microwave! If you did that with blood it would qoagulate and go bad... I know you probobly don't care, it's just one of those random things that really bugs me for no aperant reason...
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 09, 2004 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very great start to the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like you have a great start to this story. Everything is well written and is very interesting to read. I hope that you continue on with it. Once again, great job!
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