| "Koibito Yami" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: NemoChan320 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite story u have written so far. it is so intense, i feel so bad for poor Ryou, but im so glad that Bakura changed and they love eachother and will stay together forever. the many lemons put in were gr8 too, the foursome was a bit...awkward, but loved it in the end, lol. just want to say that i love all ur stories tho. Ryou and Bakura have always been a favorite of mine, and i love the fact that ur stories mostly circle around them. i hope u keep on writing, looking foreward to more by u ^_^
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Title: U83R 1337 H4X0R
Reviewed By: U83R 1337 H4X0R [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great read, altho i did feel a wee bit ill in some parts :P but that shows how well you can paint a scene. for a place to post pics u made i would sugest www.keiichianimeforever.com under the yugioh fanclub (also they have a great yaoi fanclub if thats the kind of pics u make)
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Title: Wonderful...
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear hato_chisaii, I only rated your spelling & grammer down because, like Caitie's review, you missed a few letters or capitalised the wrong one. Other than that, your stories are the best I have ever read. You probably have more talent than any other story any other author/ess I have ever had the perverse pleasure of reading. I really hope you can continue/finish all your other works here. Sincerely, colorless egyptian
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: February 20, 2005 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wait wait wait wait WAIT. i never read the author's note for Chapter 14, but now that i have...WHERE IS THE SEQUAL? AND THE SEQUAL FOR THE SEQUAL?! WHERE ARE THEY, CHIISAI??? are they in the same place the rest of Forever Autumn is? IN A BLACK HOLE? HMMMMM? *glares* LOL, i'm not really angry. but i DO want the sequal to this and THAT story's sequal to colme out. and FOREVER AUTUMN! I MUST HAVE FOREVER AUTUMN!!!
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Reviewed By: Caitie On: February 05, 2005 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a brilliant story, but the four horsemen of the apocalypse are: War, Death, Famine and Pestilence (Disease and Pestilence are the same thing) or if you want to go with the original five just include kaos. The only reason I rated you down is that you occasionally missed a letter or capitalised the wrong letter.
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Reviewed By: Lunaris On: December 12, 2004 17:24 CST
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This was definitely one of my favorite fics. You should be proud of yourself with what you wrote right here. This is very good, Even when for all this trouble, for a measely floor lamp. *giggles about it*
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 04:39 CST
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oh god... oh RA... in the names of Ra... this is a good and fantastic story... i can't believe only 9 plp made it a point to review. i loved it...
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Title: loved this
Reviewed By: AutumnRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!! Hell I luv all ur fics! Don't ever stop writing, you have a real gift. Oh and I'd really like to see ur art, so if you want email me at darknova19@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:24 CDT
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oh and i also LOVED your poem!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:23 CDT
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wow! that was one of the best stories ive ever read!!!! i really liked the foursome in chapter 9. and all that trouble over a floor lamp. there were points in ths story that i laughed so hard my dad came to make sure i was ok. i hope you write more because youre really talanted.
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Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 12:11 CDT
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Well written. I especially like the title of Chapter Ten 'Dance with the Devil'. You should be proud of yourself.
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Reviewed By: firebaby2kitsune On: September 11, 2004 21:43 CDT
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Why can I not find your other stories??? "Tearing Down the Sky" and "I Hate It. I Crave it." and all the others??? WHY THEY ARE NOT THERE??? PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU REMOVED THEM!!! I CANNOT FIND THEM!!! Please e-mail me at KusabanaHikari88@aol.com and tell me what happened to the rest of your stories!!! WHY I CANNOT FIND THEM??? This was a really really great story, though. Perfect ending. Absolutely perfect. I'm gonna go read it again!!! TOODLES!!!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 11, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, THAT WAS GREAT!!!! THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR FINALLY PUTTING THIS UP! I LOVED IT! But I was mad all through chapter thirteen...that bastard...controlling Baku-chan like that...but it was great anyway! And funny! The last few chaps were sooooooo funny! But there is one thing...A FLOOR LAMP??? ALL THIS TROUBLE WAS OVER A FLIPPIN' FLOOR LAMP??? WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT ALL ABOUT??? Still...it WAS hilarious...anyway, loved it, wanna read it again, it was hilarious...now all we're missing is Forever Autumn, which is just as good as this one! So get it up soon, k? Oh, and BTW, I'm printing out all your stories so I can put them all in my binder and take them to school. That's how good they are.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 10, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* Floor lamp?! Oh my RA! Well it's kinda of funny, but poor Rypu! No wonder Kura's so Pissed! Anyway liked Ryou's dream at the end! It sounds like he dreamt of Malik and Marik, Isis, Ahmose and Mikado...
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story it was wondefully entertaining.
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