| "Drawn into Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 16:46 CST
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GAHHH!! You didn't post the fifth chapter here!! I also didn't mention how very well written this is (I'm a crap reviewer - you get used to it :D ) The very first line is a perfect opening. I love your style... carry on - and POST THE FIFTH CHAPTER HERE!!! Or I'll yell at you some more... :D
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 05:42 CDT
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Ohhhhhh - I LIKE!!! I like a lot!! :D I'm VERY partial to tall Saiyan males with masses of wild hair... *big heart eyes* I'm rather fond of their sons too... :D Nice OC - I do hope she gets to kill her jailer. Please hurry up and update!!
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Title: HMMMmm. read below
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: September 09, 2004 05:03 CDT
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you should have made the saiyan pan and the man keep as bardock if u want her 2 kno her grandfather or make the saiyan vegeta so they could get 2 kno eachothe or better yet trunks so they could get 2 know eachother lol but overall its a good fic just swop characters
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: September 09, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start. You've gotten me hooked. I love a well written OC and your is pretty captivating.Please update soon.
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