Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first of all, I wrote this review when there was only a single chapter up. So, my best advise would be to write the rest of the story. I really can't make an accruate review without more. Other then a few minor grammatical errors that can easily be fixed in a matter of minutes with a revision, there were no major big deals. I like the concept, and there are a lot of places that you can go. You have had plenty of time. Now I and everyone else need to see some more chapters before anyone can make a review.
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