| "Hesitation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must keep going!! Seriously I need to know whats gonna happen!!
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Reviewed By: Yersi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ho, please write more, I think your story is intresting
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Reviewed By: Hikari Nymph (not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^___________________________________^ I smile because I like it. Who am I kidding? I loved it. I love guy on guy action. The grammer wasn't the good, but it was so worth reading. I love Envy. He's so kewl. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you post it soon. Please post it soon. (On hands and knees) I beg of you! Post the next chapter soon! (Bit of a drama queen, ain't I?)
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Reviewed By: C Com15 On: November 21, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic!it's really good..heck better than good,it's one of many yaoi fics that i read and deeply enjoyed!can't wait til chapter4!though,not to be a meanie or anything,but your grammer is a bit messed up,but otherwise OK!ummmm...i hate it when my comments sound cony and i can't think of anything else to type-_- well...bye-bye,i geuss. like i said,can't wait til chapter4!^.^
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