| "Hiei's New House" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Update soon
Reviewed By: inuyashapup2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so please update soon i am dying to read what happens!! *big watery puppy eyes* please...
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: me-who eles would it be? On: November 24, 2004 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: elemantle On: September 18, 2004 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this aint a kurama/botan?!?!?!?! awwwww man that sucks....maybe you should have koena die and kurama and botan get toghter, idk...but great fic
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Title: HieiWannabe
Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering what a horror/comedy story would be like. This one might be pretty interesting, but I think it would be better if you added some more narration. Just reading quote after quote after quote gets dull.
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad, your a pretty good writer! update soon!! ^^
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