| "Seeing Through the Person: Dante's Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Lack of seriousness
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 14:12 CST
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I noticed alot of the stories seemed a little lacking at times. The house seems to have no real purpose for one and Dante just seems more like a background character than the protagonist.
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Title: Nice one
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 13:32 CST
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I like your story and I can't but notice that Dante's character in the story closely resembles his character in the game. But he to have less of a Devil May Care attitude in this fanfic. In your next one I would encourage making him seem a little more carefree. If you need a reference try reading Knights of the Realms by EverpresentKaze because he has Dante dialed.You have my attention and if you need anything you know where to find me. Your Friendly Neighborhood Reviewer, FFXInuyasha1.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: theallknowingoracle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey niko nice story, I love your dante and angel stories, keep writing. Mortals fear what they don't understand, Your friend, Theallknowingoracle
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Title: whoah
Reviewed By: mkire On: December 23, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have potential, kid.Hope you keep writing and most of all about Dante Sparda.I rated you on ideas for the story and on how you spell corectly and how often.By the way you spelled 47 words wrong.Try to edit your work.Anyways, I'm looking forward to your next fanfic.Gotta bounce!!!
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Title: whoah
Reviewed By: mkire On: December 23, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have potential, kid.Hope you keep writing and most of all about Dante Sparda.I rated you on ideas for the story and on how you spell corectly and how often.By the way you spelled 47 words wrong.Try to edit your work.Anyways, I'm looking forward to your next fanfic.Gotta bounce!!!
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Reviewed By: SpardaJR [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 20:04 CDT
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*hits griffinjr.* that for the msaking me get stabbed by brass....my swimsuit career is ruined now! good chapter,but make them longer
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: littleone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story!!! Update soon!
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Title: HAHA!
Reviewed By: kybo the terror (too lazy) On: June 20, 2005 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*in taunting voice* I know What happens! Nanananabooboo! GReat Chappy Alexis!
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Reviewed By: Kage Bara (shadow rose) On: March 10, 2005 01:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like it,please finish it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: kybo the terror (too lazy) On: January 14, 2005 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
YES! I did read it all!!! ((At the Expense of my Dogz))
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Title: Good fic
Reviewed By: Chocolate Dargon from Hell On: January 14, 2005 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! This is Mint Chocolate's bro! You don't know how many times she BEGS me to read this fic!! I couldn't review one day, but I can now! I can see why Mint Chocolate likes your fics! Devil May Cry is the best game in the whole damn world!! I've beaten the games 1,000 times! Or even more! Plaese update! Bye!
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Title: HAHAHA
Reviewed By: Mint Chocolate On: October 06, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic!! This is so funny!! Please update!! My brother had this game!!
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Title: YAAAAAYNESS!!!!
Reviewed By: PuNk.princess.Ai On: September 15, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm lovin' the story Niko-kun! please don't stop! if the stupid dumba$$ people on mediaminer(and i MEAN IT!) get rid your story please tell me and kybo-san where you are moving your story too!*is still glomping Daisuke* PuNk Ai:say bye! Daisuke: -///- *gets closer to his face* PuNk Ai:dai-kun? Daisuke:*finally wakes up*O/////O PuNk Ai:now say bye Daisuke! Daisuke:o-ok.......um....bye PuNk Ai:good! jA nE! Ai
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Title: AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewed By: PuNk.princess.Ai On: September 10, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story i've read in a while.....PLEASE DO MORE PRECIOUS!!!(from D.N. angel)daisuke:why do you always say that? PuNk Ai:O.O daisuke:what? is there something on my fa-- *takles him down (like chi from chobits)* daisuke: O////O ;you know you want her =daisuke=:n-NO I DON'T!!! ;oh, don't lie to me ~PuNk Ai~:what are you guys talking about? ;how did you get in daisuke's thoughts? ~PuNk Ai~me no know *they both sweatdrop* ^back to normal!!^ *is now sitting in daisuke lap with his arms over me* PuNk Ai:REALLY good story please do more, say by dai-kun! daisuke: *still blushing*......write more....and....um....bye? PuNk Ai: no no! like this....*ahem*....jA nE! see you soon!! Now...*turns around and looks at him directly, blushes deeper red* i need to teach you a few things.....ooooooh, that sounds nice,you lucky dog daisuke....=daisuke=n-not like that!!! Ai
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Reviewed By: kybo the terror (too lazy) On: September 10, 2004 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY neko!
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