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Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 10:38 CST
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Hi Woodshop! :-) I wanted to thank-you for your comment, because yes, a part of my chapter was cut off, so thank-you for pointing that out to me, as I hadn't noticed. I've re-downloaded the chapter and it looks like my last little paragraph is there. Hopefully the chapter will seem more complete now. I hope you enjoy, and thanks again!! :-) Lady P. Note to everyone** Please note that chapter 28 has been redownloaded due to a missing paragraph. Thank-you all for your understanding.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 20:11 CST
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"Inu Yasha," she thought, as she struggled to reach within her memories of him for comfort and reassurance, when a sudden odd humming began to coil its way inside her. If Kagome hadn't known any better, she would have sworn that Inu Yasha was in the room with her, but he wasn't. He was somewhere inside her, calling to her. Is that really the end of the chapter?? Only reasion i ask is there wa no ending comments or thingss. i just wana be sure th chapter wasn't like cut off when it was posted or something..
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:05 CST
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Naraku is a sadistic bastard...he always has been. How do you protect yourself from your own worst nightmares? I hope that InuYasha and the gang don't take too long to find Kagome. She's got her hands full trying to keep heart and soul together in the face of Naraku's cruelty. -- Great chapter.
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Title: Nice chapter!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 28, 2005 12:58 CST
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InuYasha is a highly-emotional creature and falling into a deep-blue-funk when he could no-longer sense Kagome through thier mate-bond is very much in character for him. That is was Kouga that was able to reach him and snap him out of it with compassion instead of his fist threw me for a second. Kouga has always loved Kagome as well in his own way, but he knows that she loves InuYasha even if he never admits it. He also knows that InuYasha would do anything to get her back and that's what they need; a beyond-stubborn hunter who will put his life on the line. Kouga would do that as well, but their odds are better with two such persons working together. They can cover more territory. Sango and Miroku bring their own skills and will also help get their friend back...to their very last breath. Kagome is the glue that holds them together. They will surmount any obstical to get her back. After losing to Naraku once already with devastating results...I almost feel sorry for the poor bugger when they finally catch up to him. If Kagome is hurt or worse when that happens...his punishment will be ten-fold. As for the new Kikyou...she's a right-handy bitch that needs to be 'put down' for her own good. Looks like anything good inside of her has been corrupted or burned away by her desire for revenge and an unhealthy want for power. -- I'm hanging in there and will wait almost patiently for the next chapter. LOL
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: m.f. On: February 28, 2005 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so there is not much i can say. everyone said what i wanted to say. you know, oh it's great and how i love this fic. So what can i say that would make it sound anybetter? you are a wonderfull writer. i love your story i hope you keep writeing it. much luv mel
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 27, 2005 19:54 CST
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I love Kouga, he's such a team player. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DANNYP On: February 12, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is wonderful!!!! i love it it's great! i hope you keep updateing.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 10:13 CST
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1000 apologies from this tale spinner for taking so long to review! It makes perfect sense now that the group has finally found their strenghts...been reunited with their weapons, for Naraku to rear his evil head. It's a very "Murphy's Law" kind of universe, eh? So, Naraku suspects that Kagome has been reborn with the jewel... I still wonder how Kikyo will be further involved (argh..evil woman!). Your scene with Inu "taking care" of "his girl" was just sweet! The love he has for Kagome is so obvious...he really is such a softy underneath it all. Ah...lucky Kagome! Of course, she's not so lucky right now...but I have not doubt that her hero Yasha will save her with their other friends! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (NSI) On: January 30, 2005 15:20 CST
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Wow, it seems like ages since I last reviewed your story. Sorry about that though I kinda lost it...eh he stupid me. -_-' Man I feel like such a baka for missing all your chapters for they were all amazing! It took me such a long time just to catch up! N e ways I just have to say that your story is progressing very nicely and that your lemons are soooo good! I hope that there r ging to be more in the future. Kudos to u for making such an amazing story (that's like the third time I used that word) and damn u for the cliff hanger. Hope that there is going to be more lemons later and I can't for the next chappie. (don't worry I'll try to review then) ~Peace!
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Title: Oh No!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 30, 2005 00:32 CST
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Naraku captured Kagome! That's not good. --- Nice action scene.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 22:50 CST
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wow - wonderful - more?? can't wait!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 06:00 CST
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I loved this!! First off, I think the concept of the weapon being an extension of the warrior makes *perfect* sense on all sorts of pyschological and spiritual levels. But even more, I adore the fact that INUYASHA - the hanyou, the creature who initially had a broken spirit due to his origins and the way he had been treated for them - is the one whose strength of heart, devotion to friends, and purity of soul is the key to unlocking the power of his friends. Words can't describe how much I think this turn of events is so poignant and so elevating for this Inu fan! I just feel like cheering for your Inuyasha. While he's always depicted as being physically strong and stubborn...I just love that you've portrayed him as the loving, loyal being that I think him to be. Again...just LOVED this whole chapter!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:56 CST
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"Know thyself" ---- Yeah, this is gonna be fun!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:59 CST
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I came across this yesterday and was determined to finish it...except it isn't finished! LoL ---Great story so far. Interesting plot, the characters are represented well, plenty of detail and long! The longer the better, hehe. ----Your writing style is very good, no complaints there. Only a few typos; the most common being the lack of the posessive 's as opposed to the plural s - i.e. soul's/souls dog's/dogs (not the actual words, just examples) but that's not as important as being able to tell the story, of which you are doing a fantastic job. ----You also have some very *blush* steamy scenes. I know I couldn't write those but I appreciate the work that goes into such occurances while still keeping the players in character. Nicely done. ---Well, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 09:28 CST
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Ok....I FINALLY had a chance to catch up on the last 4 chapters of your story. I know, totally lame. But truly, I wanted to savor your updates...wanted to read them in a consecutive manner...and had to wait til Winter Break to do so. OH MY GOSH!! Your writing rocks my world! Everytime I think I have something figured out, you manage to add a new twist somehow weaving poetic imagery with action. Gosh darnit, my writing is SO plain compared to yours! Sigh. I love your story. I'm glad Miroku and Sango finally had their chance to "reunite"...but of course I want more Inu-Kag lemon (ahem, y'know there's always that one-shot....) hehehe. And Kikyo is back in the picture...icky-poo! Lots of exciting action coming up in the future...whether it be from Kikyo, Naraku, or this mysterious cloaked figure...not to mention the white light voice. Sigh. How do you do it all? :)
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