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"Children of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ]
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 Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2010 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
In my ever widening quest for good fanfic to read I stumbled across this gem that has been buried under years of dust. It has been a truly wonderful read. While not entirely complete, since there are several loose threads out there, like what is up with Kikyo, and what is it that Kaede want to tell Inuyasha after the battle, and my personal favorite, is Kagome gonna get to have that talk with Lastat? It more or less stands as is. And while I know you haven't been on MM in years, I somehow hope that my well wishes reach you thru the ethers of cyberspace. And even though I know the chances are slim Children of Light shall dwell on my favorites watch for list in the hope that one day it shall continue.
 Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2009 20:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was a really good fic=D i give you a thumbs up for itXD lol i loved the ending=D but it would have been nice to see what happens to them afterwards...as like a tie in or something but oh wellXD great job=D
 Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2008 16:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Greetings. I first read this fanfic a few years ago, and I finally came back to reread. The amazing thing is that this story is even better than I remembered it. I wish I had reviewed back then, back when it hadn't been 2 years since you last visited mediaminer, but I didn't feel qualified until I wrote something of my own. This story has everything: action, adventure, romance, comedy, suspense; the list goes on and on. I love how you brought all the characters back, and tied up all the loose ends. Some wrap-up chapters would have been nice, but the ending is fine the way it ended up. I don't really like the present-tense style of writing very much, and you had some grammatical errors, but nothing that even came close to detracting from my enjoyment of the story. I don't know what circumstances prompted you to stop writing fanfiction with the talent you showed in "Children of Light," but I sincerely wish there was more of your work out there.
 Reviewed By: hanyou4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2008 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now THAT'S how you end a fanfic! Naraku dies and everybody survives. YAY!!!
 Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2007 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the first time that I have ready this particular story. I also really like how it is turning out and in the way that the characters have evolved throughout the story.. The only thing that I have seen is that I am not sure if the story is finished or not. I would really like to know what is going to happen in the end. When yo find the tiem can you please update your story, I would really like to see how it ends.
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 19:25 CDT
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Wow, nice battle scene! I love it when they mix it up. I'm glad I finally found time to R&R this. Moving sure eats up one's free time. It looks like you're about to wrap this story up. - Great job!
 Reviewed By: Bloody Grave  On: July 23, 2005 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Story is awesome so far. I love it!!! Please keep updating.
 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2005 21:42 CDT
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Two chapters in one day!! That makes me happy!! Great action - but Kagome should be more optimistic! Doubt is always a bad idea. I'll wait for more!
 Title: read it all
Reviewed By: trujinx  On: June 01, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just read all 29 chapters and I can't wait for the rest, also, this lady, adeke is she really keade because they have the same letters just rearranged, i don't know it's just something i noticed.(or did i spell her name wrong)LOL also,i love how you put in Lestat, LOVE HIM!! you have like the greatest story, very original and also your very strong in your writing, if anyone flames you for this is mestup in the head, anyway keep writing! trujinx
 Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 15, 2005 16:29 CDT
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wawo, I really hope you up date soon. I wanna know what happens to Kagome. Update Soon!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13(NSI)  On: April 23, 2005 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy crap! I knew that Hojo couldn't be trusted! That little bastard I hope he burns in hell along with Kikyo. I'm so sorry that I didn't review your story in such a long time, i'm a bad reviewer. N e ways, is the story almost done? I mean if they already found the 'jewel' does that mean that the 'final' battle is approaching soon? It's actually really clever to have thought up how the jewel is made up, and adding Kouga to be part of it is really smart. And here I thought that Kouga's only purpose in life was to make Inuyasha's life a living hell! Anyways great chapter(s) and please update soon! ~peace!
 Reviewed By: coldfire  On: March 15, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was a cool fan fic! one of the best i have ever read. i hope u write some more real soon. its really original. keep up the good work!!!!^_^
 Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 03, 2005 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi Woodshop! :-) I wanted to thank-you for your comment, because yes, a part of my chapter was cut off, so thank-you for pointing that out to me, as I hadn't noticed. I've re-downloaded the chapter and it looks like my last little paragraph is there. Hopefully the chapter will seem more complete now. I hope you enjoy, and thanks again!! :-) Lady P. Note to everyone** Please note that chapter 28 has been redownloaded due to a missing paragraph. Thank-you all for your understanding.
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2005 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
"Inu Yasha," she thought, as she struggled to reach within her memories of him for comfort and reassurance, when a sudden odd humming began to coil its way inside her. If Kagome hadn't known any better, she would have sworn that Inu Yasha was in the room with her, but he wasn't. He was somewhere inside her, calling to her. Is that really the end of the chapter?? Only reasion i ask is there wa no ending comments or thingss. i just wana be sure th chapter wasn't like cut off when it was posted or something..
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2005 21:05 CST
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Naraku is a sadistic bastard...he always has been. How do you protect yourself from your own worst nightmares? I hope that InuYasha and the gang don't take too long to find Kagome. She's got her hands full trying to keep heart and soul together in the face of Naraku's cruelty. -- Great chapter.
 Title: Nice chapter!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi)  On: February 28, 2005 12:58 CST
Comment/Review:
InuYasha is a highly-emotional creature and falling into a deep-blue-funk when he could no-longer sense Kagome through thier mate-bond is very much in character for him. That is was Kouga that was able to reach him and snap him out of it with compassion instead of his fist threw me for a second. Kouga has always loved Kagome as well in his own way, but he knows that she loves InuYasha even if he never admits it. He also knows that InuYasha would do anything to get her back and that's what they need; a beyond-stubborn hunter who will put his life on the line. Kouga would do that as well, but their odds are better with two such persons working together. They can cover more territory. Sango and Miroku bring their own skills and will also help get their friend back...to their very last breath. Kagome is the glue that holds them together. They will surmount any obstical to get her back. After losing to Naraku once already with devastating results...I almost feel sorry for the poor bugger when they finally catch up to him. If Kagome is hurt or worse when that happens...his punishment will be ten-fold. As for the new Kikyou...she's a right-handy bitch that needs to be 'put down' for her own good. Looks like anything good inside of her has been corrupted or burned away by her desire for revenge and an unhealthy want for power. -- I'm hanging in there and will wait almost patiently for the next chapter. LOL
 Title: love it
Reviewed By: m.f.  On: February 28, 2005 08:25 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok so there is not much i can say. everyone said what i wanted to say. you know, oh it's great and how i love this fic. So what can i say that would make it sound anybetter? you are a wonderfull writer. i love your story i hope you keep writeing it. much luv mel
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: February 27, 2005 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I love Kouga, he's such a team player. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
 Title: loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DANNYP  On: February 12, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your story is wonderful!!!! i love it it's great! i hope you keep updateing.
 Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2005 10:13 CST
Comment/Review:
1000 apologies from this tale spinner for taking so long to review! It makes perfect sense now that the group has finally found their strenghts...been reunited with their weapons, for Naraku to rear his evil head. It's a very "Murphy's Law" kind of universe, eh? So, Naraku suspects that Kagome has been reborn with the jewel... I still wonder how Kikyo will be further involved (argh..evil woman!). Your scene with Inu "taking care" of "his girl" was just sweet! The love he has for Kagome is so obvious...he really is such a softy underneath it all. Ah...lucky Kagome! Of course, she's not so lucky right now...but I have not doubt that her hero Yasha will save her with their other friends! Can't wait for more!
 Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (NSI)  On: January 30, 2005 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, it seems like ages since I last reviewed your story. Sorry about that though I kinda lost it...eh he stupid me. -_-' Man I feel like such a baka for missing all your chapters for they were all amazing! It took me such a long time just to catch up! N e ways I just have to say that your story is progressing very nicely and that your lemons are soooo good! I hope that there r ging to be more in the future. Kudos to u for making such an amazing story (that's like the third time I used that word) and damn u for the cliff hanger. Hope that there is going to be more lemons later and I can't for the next chappie. (don't worry I'll try to review then) ~Peace!
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