| "Children of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: Oh No!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 30, 2005 00:32 CST
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Naraku captured Kagome! That's not good. --- Nice action scene.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 22:50 CST
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wow - wonderful - more?? can't wait!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 06:00 CST
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I loved this!! First off, I think the concept of the weapon being an extension of the warrior makes *perfect* sense on all sorts of pyschological and spiritual levels. But even more, I adore the fact that INUYASHA - the hanyou, the creature who initially had a broken spirit due to his origins and the way he had been treated for them - is the one whose strength of heart, devotion to friends, and purity of soul is the key to unlocking the power of his friends. Words can't describe how much I think this turn of events is so poignant and so elevating for this Inu fan! I just feel like cheering for your Inuyasha. While he's always depicted as being physically strong and stubborn...I just love that you've portrayed him as the loving, loyal being that I think him to be. Again...just LOVED this whole chapter!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:56 CST
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"Know thyself" ---- Yeah, this is gonna be fun!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:59 CST
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I came across this yesterday and was determined to finish it...except it isn't finished! LoL ---Great story so far. Interesting plot, the characters are represented well, plenty of detail and long! The longer the better, hehe. ----Your writing style is very good, no complaints there. Only a few typos; the most common being the lack of the posessive 's as opposed to the plural s - i.e. soul's/souls dog's/dogs (not the actual words, just examples) but that's not as important as being able to tell the story, of which you are doing a fantastic job. ----You also have some very *blush* steamy scenes. I know I couldn't write those but I appreciate the work that goes into such occurances while still keeping the players in character. Nicely done. ---Well, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 09:28 CST
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Ok....I FINALLY had a chance to catch up on the last 4 chapters of your story. I know, totally lame. But truly, I wanted to savor your updates...wanted to read them in a consecutive manner...and had to wait til Winter Break to do so. OH MY GOSH!! Your writing rocks my world! Everytime I think I have something figured out, you manage to add a new twist somehow weaving poetic imagery with action. Gosh darnit, my writing is SO plain compared to yours! Sigh. I love your story. I'm glad Miroku and Sango finally had their chance to "reunite"...but of course I want more Inu-Kag lemon (ahem, y'know there's always that one-shot....) hehehe. And Kikyo is back in the picture...icky-poo! Lots of exciting action coming up in the future...whether it be from Kikyo, Naraku, or this mysterious cloaked figure...not to mention the white light voice. Sigh. How do you do it all? :)
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Title: Hope you keep writing...
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really gald to see that you've rememchioned the Entity of Light again. I always seem to say ' finnish or make more chaps' but right now all I'm gonna say is you're a really talented Author and I hope you stick with it. (And secence this chap isn't finnished I'm allowed to say this...) I really look forward to you completing this chapter. Oh! and everyone has writers block so don't worry. I mean I've had it for a cupple of years now, which means I'm gonna have a lot of work on making that book I plan on publishing one day. Keep on writing! And Happy Holidays & New Years! * Queen of Cuteys *
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 16:16 CST
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Hello! This is szmadad...I finally came up with a nom de plume for myself now that I've posted my first fanfic here at MM.org. I'm so excited that you've updated!! And I'm racking my brain trying to figure out who could be that "masked man" in the robes?! Someone from the Inuyasha universe or an OC? As for the lemons, I of course will beg you for more Inu-Kag moments of hotness! Honestly, you've done such a GREAT job writing them...and now that I've written a lemon of my own, I can relate to how difficult writing them can be. It's hard to maintain class while making sure that the passion leaps off the page - and I think you do a wonderful job balancing the two. In general, I just love your fic - your idea is creative and you've got the skills to create a vivid picture of what's going on. Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love were the story's going and I'm really excited to know what's going to happen next. Hope to see more chapters! * Queen of Cuteys *
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Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 18:54 CST
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Thanks "Kagome Fan"! =) I'm glad to know that you're enjoying the story and the lemons. They're actually alot harder to write then I thought they would be, and all I can say is that most of it, is what I wish REALITY could actually be like! we can always hope right? ;-) But keep reading, and I hope you keep enjoying!! =) Lady P!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 01:13 CST
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You are the best goddamn lemon writer I have ever read. And trust me, I've read a lot of lemons over the years! Aside from that, the story is great also, I congratulate you. But hot damn! If ANY of that comes from personal experience, you are one hell of a lucky person! All right, I just had to say that. I am enjoying your story immensely, keep writing and often!
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 13:22 CDT
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Wow! This is a great story! And whats up w/ the Seer? Is she evil too? Please keep updating!!!
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Title: Thank-you everyone!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 11:33 CDT
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Hi everyone! I just had to write a quick little comment and thank-you all for your wonderful comments! I can't tell you how nervous I get from time to time writing this story, but it's getting way easier now, thanks to you guys!! I'm glad to hear that you like my little guest star appearance, I wasn't too sure about how some people might react, but I'm a HUGE Lestat fan myself! =) So I just HAD to do it!! But like I said, he's only a cameo, but he is going to have some fun at our favourite dog demons expense! Again, couldn't resist. Things are really going to start moving along in the story, so I really hope you enjoy. And again, thank-you, thank-you, thank-you for all your support! Lady P.
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You soo need to finnish chapter 13!!!!!! *Queen of Cuteys*
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:32 CDT
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First of all, I have to THANK YOU for all the wonderful Inu-Kag lemons you've written! And please, keep them coming...after all, as Inuyasha so rightly said - he and Kagome have lots to make up for! But I just had to write about your last few paragraphs....Vampire Lestat?!?! Ohmigod....if I was Kagome...I would just die...simply die. I used to obsessively Interview with a Vampire... Poor Inuyasha is going to need to do some heavy reclaiming to remind his starstruck mate of the fact that she should be drooling over HIM and not anyone - even if they are the undead - else! Heheh.
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