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Reviewed By: Feral Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I can't believe the luck I had falling onto this awesome of a story! It totally has me hooked onto it, and the storyline never has a dull moment. Bravo and keep up the good work!
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: axelalx On: September 23, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did really good at this, it was so creative with the storyline and nice detail with the LEMONS. When can you complete it???
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 18:35 CDT
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Good lord girl, you are too cool! I'm so happy that you wrote the Inu-Kag lemon so quickly...I mean, after a whopping flashback like the one they shared....they could only reaffirm their matehood, eh? So, when Inuyasha went out with that crazy Kikyo who vandalized his car...was she the original Kikyo's reincarnation? Or was it a random coincidence that he happened to go out with a psycho named Kikyo in this 2nd lifetime? Ahh...and I suppose karma is giving good ol' Miroku a bit of a break since Sango seems a little more tolerant of his lechery this time around :) Thanks for trying to answer questions...I know that I asked plenty! I agree with you...I'd rather have you maintain quality in your story...especially since your plot is complex....I mean trying to explain Naraku's existence in this world is definitely something I can't wait to read about! :)
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (NSI) On: September 17, 2004 20:21 CDT
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Sorry I couldn't review your other chapters, my comp was on the fritz! Anyways, to some it all up your chapters are great! No spelling errors and the grammer was good. And besides that...YAY THEY KISSED!!! That was probably the best part of the stroy so far, but of course, all the other parts of your story were also great! So, does that mean they have their memories back? And if they do...what's gonna happen next? I just gotta know!!!! ~Peace!
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Title: All will be revealed =)
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 13:55 CDT
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I am so glad that you are enjoying my fic! It makes me feel really great to know that it is having such a positive response with readers. It makes all the hard work worthwhile, especially when readers review and give you their impressions. You had some great questions, and unfortunately, all I can tell you is that, all will be revealed in time :-). I know, I'm awful, but the story line ended up being more complex then I thought it would, so it's going to take some time to build it up and get all the background in. I didn't want to rush anything. I think taking your time builds a good flow to a story and you can really draw the reader in, and that, as you may have guessed, is my ultimate goal! But I will tell you that, yes, Inu Yasha grew up the same as in the anime, this will be hinted at througout the story, and you will be seeing Naraku eventually (you'll see why life seems so 'normal' a little later on), as for Kikyou, I mentioned her breifly in chap 5, and I'm actually not too sure yet how big a role I want her to play in the story. Ah yes, and flashbacks play a big role in my story, so you will see both stories unveil around eachother. Hopefully, by the end, it will all make sense, 'cause there are still a lot of surprises coming! I hope that answers some of your questions (I know I didn't give you a lot of info, but hey, we don't want to ruin the surprise right?) I hope you keep enjoying!! And thank-you again for your support! Lady P.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 10:44 CDT
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Yet another terrific chapter that explains so much. I like how you used the original storyline and tweaked it...Kagome and Kikyo were cousins instead of reincarnate and incarnate... and Inu and Kag were mates. Will you give us any background on how Inuyasha and kagome met and fell in love the first time around...or whether he had the same issues regarding being a hanyou as he does in the anime? Perhaps as flashbacks? And of course, I'm curious as to what happened in the Feudal Era once Naraku got hold of the jewel...what happened to Shippo and Kaede? And if ultimate evil (Naraku) won back in the Feudal Era...how is life so "normal" in the present? Is Naraku still around? Where are he and Kikyo hiding? Really, can't wait to read your next update!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 21:07 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!! You have me completely HOOOKED with this story! Not only is your writing excellent but I don't think I've seen a plot like this before. It's funny how fate is drawing everybody together. Bless you for keeping the pairs traditional...I LOVE Inu & Kag!! I wonder, were they mated in the past? Is that why Inuyasha felt a physical pain...a need to answer Kagome's plea for her "someone" to find her? But I think what really floors me is your descriptions of Kagome's feelings of not belonging to the "real world" and how fantasy has seemed so real to her....and I can say I totally relate to the way you have her describe things. I on the other hand am pretty sure I'm not the reincarnation of a miko :) Too bad, that would mean Inuyasha would be mine! Heheh. Honestly, this is one of the best quality fics I've found to date...please do keep updating. You left things on such a suspensful note!
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Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Hi everyone! Just wanted to let you know that it looks like I've finally got the chapters and updates working properly. Thank goodness! I've posted the new chaps. Please let me know what you think =). Lady P.
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Title: PLEASE READ EVERYONE
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:14 CDT
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Hi everyone! This is Lady P! I just wanted to let you know that I am TONS of problems trying to updload edit chapters. I have up to chapter 7 right now downloaded in my story manager (as a birthday present to Kitty Paws! :-) ) but they are not showing. Also, some of my reviews are not showing as well. I'm waiting to see if mediaminer is able to help, so please cross your fingers for me and hopefully the rest of the chapters will be up soon. Thanks everyone!! Lady P.
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 14, 2004 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better. Kagome really had some deep thoughts, didn't she? I liked that. It showed that she knew she wasn't like everybody else and really didn't care. She's sad, but she'll be happy soon. Won't she? Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon.
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Reviewed By: KiTTy PAws-182 On: September 13, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is one of the greatest stories I ever read! I love your writing style. -Ja ne P.S.Update already! That could be a preasent 4 my B-Day! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 12, 2004 21:09 CDT
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This is a great story. Very interseting plot. I love it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 NSI On: September 12, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. The plot seems very interesting and I can't wait to find out what will happen next. The way you describe each charater was great and your spelling and grammer is flawless. Can't wait to read more, but before I go I have one question to ask: What are the couplings in this story? And are there gonna be lemons? Actaully that was more than one question! -_-' N e ways, keep up the good work! ~Peace!
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