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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 21:07 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!! You have me completely HOOOKED with this story! Not only is your writing excellent but I don't think I've seen a plot like this before. It's funny how fate is drawing everybody together. Bless you for keeping the pairs traditional...I LOVE Inu & Kag!! I wonder, were they mated in the past? Is that why Inuyasha felt a physical pain...a need to answer Kagome's plea for her "someone" to find her? But I think what really floors me is your descriptions of Kagome's feelings of not belonging to the "real world" and how fantasy has seemed so real to her....and I can say I totally relate to the way you have her describe things. I on the other hand am pretty sure I'm not the reincarnation of a miko :) Too bad, that would mean Inuyasha would be mine! Heheh. Honestly, this is one of the best quality fics I've found to date...please do keep updating. You left things on such a suspensful note!
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Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Hi everyone! Just wanted to let you know that it looks like I've finally got the chapters and updates working properly. Thank goodness! I've posted the new chaps. Please let me know what you think =). Lady P.
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Title: PLEASE READ EVERYONE
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:14 CDT
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Hi everyone! This is Lady P! I just wanted to let you know that I am TONS of problems trying to updload edit chapters. I have up to chapter 7 right now downloaded in my story manager (as a birthday present to Kitty Paws! :-) ) but they are not showing. Also, some of my reviews are not showing as well. I'm waiting to see if mediaminer is able to help, so please cross your fingers for me and hopefully the rest of the chapters will be up soon. Thanks everyone!! Lady P.
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 14, 2004 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better. Kagome really had some deep thoughts, didn't she? I liked that. It showed that she knew she wasn't like everybody else and really didn't care. She's sad, but she'll be happy soon. Won't she? Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon.
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Reviewed By: KiTTy PAws-182 On: September 13, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is one of the greatest stories I ever read! I love your writing style. -Ja ne P.S.Update already! That could be a preasent 4 my B-Day! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 12, 2004 21:09 CDT
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This is a great story. Very interseting plot. I love it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 NSI On: September 12, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. The plot seems very interesting and I can't wait to find out what will happen next. The way you describe each charater was great and your spelling and grammer is flawless. Can't wait to read more, but before I go I have one question to ask: What are the couplings in this story? And are there gonna be lemons? Actaully that was more than one question! -_-' N e ways, keep up the good work! ~Peace!
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