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| "Thir13en Ghosts" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say anything except well done! I love how you incorporate the characters in the nightmarish world of the ghosts. A Yuffie vs. Freddy match sounds awesome, knives vs. knives. I hope Yuffie wins. Freddy has had is time and frankly I never root for the bad guy. :)
| Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The description of each of the monsters is a big help since I'm not familiar with some of them. I love your writing style and am staying away from reviews to save myself from spoilers. I have a feeling this fic is going to be epic. ^_^
| Title: WHAT?
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
you didn't do the auron fight? why not?
| Reviewed By: whenfoodgoesbad(notloggedon) On: September 14, 2005 00:55 CDT
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Gooo Kairi!!! >:D
| Reviewed By: Angel Yami-ko (not in) On: September 05, 2005 01:13 CDT
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Okay, so the research dude was Ansem. I'm betting on Isaac, since there's no way Kairi would be willing to kill anyone.
| Reviewed By: Deviant666 On: August 20, 2005 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! Keep it up -even though I do relaise it's not gonna last more than 1 or 2 chaps.. Sob- Anyway, I think that the 13th ghost is gonna be KH's bad guy or Sephiroth. If so, my bet's on'em! Lol. May the best one win anyway!
| Reviewed By: Angel Yami-ko (not logged in) On: August 02, 2005 19:08 CDT
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I'm not familiar with horror movies, so I can't really venture a guess. Though I am curious as to where Sadako came from - as well as Samara since she seems to pop up quite a bit in the reviews. Anyway, I lke your story. It's an interesting and unique concept and the pace is perfect for the story. I have a question, though. Who wrote the report done in the prologue? Or are you waiting to reveal that in a future chapter/epilogue? Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
| Title: forgot something
Reviewed By: red vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im starting a fanfic to but i didnt posted it yet.got some advice to me
| Title: more...me want more
Reviewed By: red vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more or i will do a crime. i will eat popcorn and im alergic to popcorn. just kidding.By the way its red hunter talking but with an account
| Title: love the fic!
Reviewed By: Zethtlangshyo On: June 29, 2005 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS NOT A FLAME, I LOVE THE STORY. Very interesting read, very cool idea. I love the horror movie compilation too, and the inclusion of Disney characters, even if they are all losing...but like you said, it's for story line purposes, hehe. No hard feelings, I adore the story. I also love how it has the perfect amount of gore, because I'm in a very macabre mood tonight. I have to say my ONLY pet peeves would be that, A) It's moving a little too fast compared to what I usually read (but I wouldn't change it if I were you because it's good that way). And B) Cid would probably never have left the Venus Gospel behind when he walked away from the fight with Leatherface, (this is assuming I read the story right and that's what actually happened) but I understand you had to have a way to kill him off...Oh well. It was good drama, I still liked it! Anyway, I'm eagerly off to start reading the rest of the story... Thank you for writing, I'm so glad to be reading it. I'm starting to get interested in posting my own fics now, this place is great...som many awesome writers. And hey - if there's anything I could to to help inspire your awesomeness, I gladly will! ~Zetht
| Title: love the fic!
Reviewed By: Zethtlangshyo On: June 29, 2005 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS NOT A FLAME, I LOVE THE STORY. Very interesting read, very cool idea. I love the horror movie compilation too, and the inclusion of Disney characters, even if they are all losing...but like you said, it's for story line purposes, hehe. No hard feelings, I adore the story. I also love how it has the perfect amount of gore, because I'm in a very macabre mood tonight. I have to say my ONLY pet peeves would be that, A) It's moving a little too fast compared to what I usually read (but I wouldn't change it if I were you because it's good that way). And B) Cid would probably never have left the Venus Gospel behind when he walked away from the fight with Leatherface, (this is assuming I read the story right and that's what actually happened) but I understand you had to have a way to kill him off...Oh well. It was good drama, I still liked it! Anyway, I'm eagerly off to start reading the rest of the story... Thank you for writing, I'm so glad to be reading it. I'm starting to get interested in posting my own fics now, this place is great...som many awesome writers. And hey - if there's anything I could to to help inspire your awesomeness, I gladly will! ~Zetht
| Title: love the fic!
Reviewed By: Zethtlangshyo On: June 29, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS NOT A FLAME, I LOVE THE STORY. Very interesting read, very cool idea. I love the horror movie compilation too, and the inclusion of Disney characters, even if they are all losing...but like you said, it's for story line purposes, hehe. No hard feelings, I adore the story. I also love how it has the perfect amount of gore, because I'm in a very macabre mood tonight. I have to say my ONLY pet peeves would be that, A) It's moving a little too fast compared to what I usually read (but I wouldn't change it if I were you because it's good that way). And B) Cid would probably never have left the Venus Gospel behind when he walked away from the fight with Leatherface, (this is assuming I read the story right and that's what actually happened) but I understand you had to have a way to kill him off...Oh well. It was good drama, I still liked it! Anyway, I'm eagerly off to start reading the rest of the story... Thank you for writing, I'm so glad to be reading it. I'm starting to get interested in posting my own fics now, this place is great...som many awesome writers. And hey - if there's anything I could to to help inspire your awesomeness, I gladly will! ~Zetht
| Title: love the fic!
Reviewed By: Zethtlangshyo On: June 29, 2005 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS NOT A FLAME, I LOVE THE STORY. Very interesting read, very cool idea. I love the horror movie compilation too, and the inclusion of Disney characters, even if they are all losing...but like you said, it's for story line purposes, hehe. No hard feelings, I adore the story. I also love how it has the perfect amount of gore, because I'm in a very macabre mood tonight. I have to say my ONLY pet peeves would be that, A) It's moving a little too fast compared to what I usually read (but I wouldn't change it if I were you because it's good that way). And B) Cid would probably never have left the Venus Gospel behind when he walked away from the fight with Leatherface, (this is assuming I read the story right and that's what actually happened) but I understand you had to have a way to kill him off...Oh well. It was good drama, I still liked it! Anyway, I'm eagerly off to start reading the rest of the story... Thank you for writing, I'm so glad to be reading it. I'm starting to get interested in posting my own fics now, this place is great...som many awesome writers. And hey - if there's anything I could to to help inspire your awesomeness, I gladly will! ~Zetht
| Title: last battle
Reviewed By: Red_Hunter On: June 29, 2005 03:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
to final battle I wish it wold have cloud winning because i like better cloud than pinhead And the battle of aerith... no comments :it was the stupidest and shortest battle of all the time
| Reviewed By: skiite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to make Cloud win! He's my favorite FF character! And of course in Kingdom Hearts!
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