| "Holding Off Hiei - A Fight For Modesty" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Theforgottenone (not signed in) On: May 20, 2005 06:51 CDT
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i haven't read it all yet buuuut i will. For now i will give you the O_O stare... *reads* O___________O.... *needs to pee* heh heh.. bye! lol j/k about that.
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Reviewed By: ferretface666 On: February 25, 2005 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good, you should make him molest Yusuke, i love the idea. its just so... yes... anyways you shoudl
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greatly entertaining. Make him molest yusuke, that'd be entertainin to see whether you'd have him enjoy it or attaempt to beat the crap out of Hiei for it. Oh, and have someone walk in on that sometime. Much bettter torture that way. Updatness soonest pleaseth
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Title: no non no
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no! bad no stopping. Hiei is mine o yes. And I do have a fatle question how nic eis his butt. *draemy look* uh update soon
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Lover13 On: November 05, 2004 18:22 CST
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Does it have to be male?'Cause he could molest Yukina>:D...If not then...Touya.My friend's going to kill me for that...And Ha!I didn't have to pee after the first chapter.I went before I read it...Update!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 19:10 CDT
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I like your story so far...um...what about...um...i don't know, i can't see Hiei molesting anyone! Ahhh! Well, good luck with picking a character!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: October 04, 2004 14:09 CDT
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OMG this is a great chapter i love it you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: R_Winner(Not Signed in) On: October 04, 2004 00:36 CDT
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Yay! Yo're story was pretty good! I enjoyed it very much! Huzuh for Kurama/Hiei! Oh oh oh! I have the perfect person fpr Hiei to molest! Itsuki! The demon who's in love with Sensui(The former spirit detective)! Yeah you could have Itsuki all depressed and stuff and Hiei desperate... And voila! Instant reason for a molesting! It would be so perfect!
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Reviewed By: Zillah On: October 02, 2004 19:38 CDT
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more- I love this fic!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 18:09 CDT
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I rather like this one. Then again I love Hiei/Kurama fics. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Fox-Fire431990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 12:36 CDT
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oh, yes. about the last comment, i did have to pee, seriously i did, so be happy.
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Reviewed By: Fox-Fire431990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 12:31 CDT
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Good start on the story. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: September 12, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Oddly, I do have to pee ~_^ Anyway, I find this amusing as all hell and think that you need to write more. So, in lieu of this thinking of mine: WRITE MORE! Yup, that's my professional advice ^_^
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