| "Not an ordinary slave" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOH please update soon.
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Title: Interesting. . .
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the concept of your story and the way you write helps to portray the points of it. There isn't very much detail or conversation, and sometimes that can make or break a good story, but I think yours has enough to get by with.
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Reviewed By: AdorableEmy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 08:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really good.I wonder what's gonna happen when she and sessh secretly meet again.Hmmmm well I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17(not logged in) On: September 23, 2004 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: trini On: September 17, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!you have to hurry with a new chapter.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: sesshomarusgirl56(not signed in) On: September 16, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fan fic is very interesting,I would guess this is your first fic? cause mine was just like it I had an origianal character but I didnt get as much feedback as I would have liked but your fic is very good and I would like to see where it goes!
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