| "Rini Vs. Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: silent saturn On: January 12, 2005 03:11 CST
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Hey how ya been, its been awhile since you put a chapter up anyways update real soon by the way your story inspired me to write one of my own on fanfiction.net if you want to read my storys well just look under the pen name 'Kitsune of the dark void' you dont have to, only if you want then go ahead its in the yu yu hakusho section, anyways would you please update I really want to know what happens next, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: chibicuteness On: December 09, 2004 18:39 CST
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update or im going to go crazy
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Reviewed By: silent saturn On: December 01, 2004 02:17 CST
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please update as soon as possible i want to read more oh and make sure rini goes with inuyasha if they visit sesshomaru
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Title: After thoughts
Reviewed By: missybee(not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what's slivercat's problem is(must be an english teacher or something)but I didn't see many spelling errors even in this chapter. Anyway I love the fluff between Inu/Kag. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: November 28, 2004 15:52 CST
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This WOULD be a very good story if it were not for the mass of missed words and spelling errors. If you have a care for your work, please make sure of what you are doing when you type.
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Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:03 CST
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This is the most fantastic, original crossover idea I've ever seen! *ponders for a moment before deciding to brush up on her Inuyasha lore*.... I can't wait to soak up the rest of it!
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: missybee(not logged in) On: November 25, 2004 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn two good chapters. I loved the second one though. Though methinks Shippo has been hanging around Miroku a little too much. Inuyasha is so funny I can't believe he let Shippo call him Inu-"father" I thought that was rude as heck. Anyway try to update ASAP. It a great story so far and I do hope you stick with it.
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Wonder fish the III On: November 22, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I thought it was cute as hell when Rin started undresses so she can get in bed with Sesshy/Kagura. Sesshy can be wonderfully sweet to Rin sometimes. I like you not going to OOCness with this. Anyway Update ASAP! *****FISH AWAY****
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I hope you update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:47 CDT
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well Okay.
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Reviewed By: kattana On: October 18, 2004 18:52 CDT
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update please
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Reviewed By: silent saturn On: October 03, 2004 22:39 CDT
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love it but strange how old is shippo and rini and could you tell us in the next chapter i mean how old does shippo look i now he's a demon so he has a longer life span but i am curiuse and does he look the same as he did when he was little only older and besides that you need to update this story to because if you dont im going to be so mad at you i will make sure you regret it trust me *evil smirk* update ja ne
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: October 02, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this can be a Shippo/Rini pairing didn't see that coming. Anyway this was a cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: mars2004 On: October 01, 2004 00:59 CDT
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NNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII you havent updated you she be thrown in jail *kidding* come on you have to update ok I WANT TO READ MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE GOT IT so update ja ne for now hurry please ^_^
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Reviewed By: nani On: September 26, 2004 22:35 CDT
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please update i would like to read more
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