| "Rini Vs. Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:03 CST
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This is the most fantastic, original crossover idea I've ever seen! *ponders for a moment before deciding to brush up on her Inuyasha lore*.... I can't wait to soak up the rest of it!
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: missybee(not logged in) On: November 25, 2004 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn two good chapters. I loved the second one though. Though methinks Shippo has been hanging around Miroku a little too much. Inuyasha is so funny I can't believe he let Shippo call him Inu-"father" I thought that was rude as heck. Anyway try to update ASAP. It a great story so far and I do hope you stick with it.
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Wonder fish the III On: November 22, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I thought it was cute as hell when Rin started undresses so she can get in bed with Sesshy/Kagura. Sesshy can be wonderfully sweet to Rin sometimes. I like you not going to OOCness with this. Anyway Update ASAP! *****FISH AWAY****
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I hope you update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:47 CDT
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well Okay.
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Reviewed By: kattana On: October 18, 2004 18:52 CDT
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update please
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Reviewed By: silent saturn On: October 03, 2004 22:39 CDT
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love it but strange how old is shippo and rini and could you tell us in the next chapter i mean how old does shippo look i now he's a demon so he has a longer life span but i am curiuse and does he look the same as he did when he was little only older and besides that you need to update this story to because if you dont im going to be so mad at you i will make sure you regret it trust me *evil smirk* update ja ne
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: October 02, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this can be a Shippo/Rini pairing didn't see that coming. Anyway this was a cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: mars2004 On: October 01, 2004 00:59 CDT
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NNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII you havent updated you she be thrown in jail *kidding* come on you have to update ok I WANT TO READ MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE GOT IT so update ja ne for now hurry please ^_^
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Reviewed By: nani On: September 26, 2004 22:35 CDT
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please update i would like to read more
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Reviewed By: silent saturn On: September 21, 2004 01:17 CDT
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love this story way much, you now thats kinda interesting a rini and fluffy pairing, if there ever was one i think i would read it. but it said something about betral in this story, who's going to betray who?. its very interesting oh and by the way im not a very big fan of heilos and rini pairings so unless it destroys the intire idea of the story or most of it and if you dont want to change it if you could, will you not have those two together, anyways thanks for listening i now im kinda boring arn't i?. awell does it matter gata go, and please update real soon you absalutaly must finish this story or i think im going to cry anyways seya real soon thanks, bye.
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Reviewed By: 1000 eternal stars On: September 20, 2004 18:16 CDT
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this is really really rrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy good i hope you can update real soon very much apretiated anyways ja ne
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Reviewed By: kitsune 44444 On: September 20, 2004 00:47 CDT
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please update this is realy good
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Title: this story is great
Reviewed By: Wonder fish the III On: September 19, 2004 03:27 CDT
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This is my fic time on this site but I been reading many fic. I really love crossovers and this is a very cool one. Minor spelling mistake in the first chapter but hey if you get someone to go over it I sure it could be perfect. I how this chapter ended it was almost like when Rini first appeared in Sailor when she almost broke Serena's neck. XD. I do hope you update this story because I'm going to bookmark it. Have no fear wonder fish is here FISH AWAY!
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Title: damn!
Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: September 14, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I was about to bitch about you not updating you other fic but now after reading this I can't really bitch since this was so expected. There's not many SM/Iy Xovers on the web. Believe I looked and the most of them are just so random and plotless. Hopefully you won't make the same mistake if this is going to be anything like WTTW then this should be an enjoyable fic. I can't wait to see what happens next. soon update soon plz...
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