| "Keep It Simple" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: kalikaze On: April 13, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a great story. PLEASE!!! UPDATE!!!!
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Title: Yummy
Reviewed By: Miststalker On: November 30, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had a few spelling errors but not many. I really enjoyed reading this fic and Simplify. please update soon. And if we could get more of Vegeta's past that would be very cool. I love these two fics (I haven't read any of your others, but you can bet I'm going to!) I can but pray you update soon. Best wishes in your writing Mist.
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so bad...I haven't reviewed this wonderful story nearly enough. Let's see...loved the massage bit and Vegeta so unused to not feeling pain that he passes out. Goku not realizing he is naked - and not caring. The scouter. Loved the scouter. I had forgotten about that - and Goku is such a wonderful little perv. Bulma's horrible fashion sense - Vegeta should wear jeans and Doc Martens - or Armani suits. *g* The image of Vegeta on his knees...just made me shiver with delight. Although...I was kind of surprised at the hiding of the ki. I really would have expected their roles to be reversed under the circumstances - with Vegeta telling Goku not to hide. Otherwise - well it was almost like Goku showing off a submissive Vegeta (since Tien and company wouldn't know the circumstances). This is a wonderful story that has grown from a one-shot - looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it immensely, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: geta_fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a great fic , I loved it .I hope you update soon PPPPLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!
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Title: Chappie 3
Reviewed By: Plyric (not signed in) On: September 28, 2004 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must've read Simplify and the first two chapters of Keep It Simple a million times over! I really need to sign in and add both of them to my favorites. ;) [I will when I do...] Beautiful. Just utter beauty. That's what sorely under-describes this chapter. Leaves me with a warm feeling of love. I can't wait for your next chapter! Beautiful story!
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 27, 2004 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
still as beautiful as ever!! keep it comming. @---^--
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have no idea how much I love your writing. Your words just draw such sentimental pictures that make your chest clench. The imagery somehow manages to be both light and dark at the same time. I envy your ability to convey a concept or emotion without ever naming it. Thank You for sharing your work. -El-
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 13, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this fic is wonderful! thank you for giving my favorite couple a fic that does them justice. i'm sick of fics that don't stay true to the characters, but this was just.......well....jeez i have no words to describe. keep it comming! here a rose for you @--^---
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