| "Needa Lift?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Hot Damn
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hot story. Wish it was me.
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all your stories which are available. Your style of writing is good but a bit more experience is needed.I like a fic if the lit. part of it pleases me, which yours did, so i gave a general rating on your grammar.I would have given you full for creativity but i thought the pup thing was rather a cliche.Don't mind the overall rating, i'm just being cranky today. You write really well, you should go on writing and update as frequently as possible or else i'll die of curiosity.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job, better than mine! You're good at this, you should write some more!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeeeeeee! that was so cute! i loved it! ^-^
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Reviewed By: animelameo On: September 17, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree. seto is a lil ooc. if you added a lil more detail into the bike rides that would be cool. other that those things this fic was great and the lemon was hot. (especially since this is your 1st)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Punctuation needed a bit of work, Kaiba seemed slightly OOC(a tiny bit too nice. Why didn't he yell at his driver? And why was he so willing to accept a ride from him? I just think his ego would'nt accept without argueing a bit, even if he does think Jou is sexy, but I liked the idea. V. good for a first try in my opinion. I fel like going for a bike ride now...
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Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!!! ^______^
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