| "Eugenics" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: ummmmmm
Reviewed By: nunchucks13 On: April 05, 2008 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make the chapies longer. It seems like you create a new chapter every paragraph. It makes it hard to get the reading flow going.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm always amused by stories that suddenly pop up after years of lying dormant. It makes me wonder what changed in the authors life to make them stop writing and then pick it back up. Anyway the Dark Angel inspired origins of the girls is wonderful. And I hope that you continue to work on this story. But I would suggest that you add spaces between paragraphs as it make it much easer to read.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
updat
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Fuzzy88 On: January 12, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying the story very much and love the interesting plot! Keep writing! it's excellent! twilight@the-lair.com
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Reviewed By: Starilight_Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Cha... good... cha... keep it up... cha
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 22:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting idea. I'd like to see more.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a starting out great please update soon
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