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| "New Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | Reviewed By: Hun Wu On: March 02, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story Hoping to See More of It
| Reviewed By: Megz On: February 05, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and can't wait for the rest.
| Reviewed By: turtlerad17 On: October 29, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an original fic, looks good, update soon
| Reviewed By: hengenjizai On: September 29, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting concept, I've always liked the whole 'sco-fi' thing, due to my extreme nerdyness. For a fanfiction.net fic(AKA The Pit of Voles), this would have been very well written. As it was, it's got decent grammar but there were several things that just stuck me as off. Grammar wise, and all. Overall, I'd say this is an excellent fanfic, but would be made even better(and more easily understood) by getting a beta. ^.^ -Piroko
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