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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for Sesshomaru rampage
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2009 18:14 CST
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Deus Ex Machina means "God in the Machine". Its a phrase commonly used when writers pull a "miracle" solution for a situation out of their metaphorical asses. The writer being god, computers being the machines they're writing on... you see where it goes. same can be said for any "miracle" solution that magically pops up out of nowhere in any fic, movie, tv show etc.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story. Original and damn intriguing. I like how Sessy is still so 'Sessy' even in a total different setting. Kudos to you.... I just hope that you will update faster than what your previous posts suggest. :)
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 08:42 CST
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doesn't seem to bounce to me. You covered some major points on this chapter including exactly why Dune was covering the alliance's butt's. Next chapter sould be quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: FUJIYama On: June 25, 2006 19:55 CDT
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nice... but you have updated in forever! oh well its really good so far!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:50 CST
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved every minute of this! I hope everyone from Sesshoumaru's past is alive. Including Kagome, because after all, you're going to need her to purify the Shikon No Tama. It's my belief that since it was embeded in her body from the time she was born, that she is the only one capable of purifing it and making the necessary wish to return everything on the earth back to normal. I also hope that Sesshomaru will realize that his family is alive and save them. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: December 04, 2005 06:51 CST
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I love this story - and it's one of the ones I always look for! It's well written and interesting. I look forward to seeing where you are going with this. Please, continue with this story :)
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Reviewed By: anamelikemine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a little frustrating to not get any feedback!!! Anyways, I love your story...Really didn't think I would at first, but I'm really glad I stayed around! It just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: anamelikemine(offline) On: August 30, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story thus far. I will pray for you grandpa's safe trip toward whatever afterlife he believes in. I have heard that many writers use tragities from their life and use them in their stories, as a way of coping. At least this way you can understand somewhat how sesshomaru is feeling. He lost everyone he ever knew, at least in your fanfiction. Your grandfather's death can be a tragety and a blessing, depending on how you look at it. I do know how you feel, my entire family has some sort of sickness, condition, or is disabled, all except me! but i have become strong because of it, both mentally and phisically. you are doing good on this story so far, just remember that writing is ment to be a hobby, not a job. quality stuff always come from people who enjoy what they do. So take your time and you might be surprised what you can do.
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Reviewed By: Megz (the real one) On: June 20, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it!. I think Inuyasha should have been alive but the choice is yours not mine.
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: June 19, 2005 20:31 CDT
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Your formatting needs serious work, everything is all smashed together. Please fix this. I really like this story, but it's very hard to read like it is.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 13:51 CST
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Um, wait, i'm confused, how can Sesshomaru and the dog demon chick comunicate? I mean if demons, or dog demons could speak his language then why didn't the evil dude who tortured my Miru just grab some misalaniuse demon and forces them to talk to him? It would have been a lot esier wouldn't it? So confused!
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