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Reviewed By: FUJIYama On: June 25, 2006 19:55 CDT
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nice... but you have updated in forever! oh well its really good so far!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:50 CST
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved every minute of this! I hope everyone from Sesshoumaru's past is alive. Including Kagome, because after all, you're going to need her to purify the Shikon No Tama. It's my belief that since it was embeded in her body from the time she was born, that she is the only one capable of purifing it and making the necessary wish to return everything on the earth back to normal. I also hope that Sesshomaru will realize that his family is alive and save them. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: December 04, 2005 06:51 CST
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I love this story - and it's one of the ones I always look for! It's well written and interesting. I look forward to seeing where you are going with this. Please, continue with this story :)
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Reviewed By: anamelikemine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a little frustrating to not get any feedback!!! Anyways, I love your story...Really didn't think I would at first, but I'm really glad I stayed around! It just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: anamelikemine(offline) On: August 30, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story thus far. I will pray for you grandpa's safe trip toward whatever afterlife he believes in. I have heard that many writers use tragities from their life and use them in their stories, as a way of coping. At least this way you can understand somewhat how sesshomaru is feeling. He lost everyone he ever knew, at least in your fanfiction. Your grandfather's death can be a tragety and a blessing, depending on how you look at it. I do know how you feel, my entire family has some sort of sickness, condition, or is disabled, all except me! but i have become strong because of it, both mentally and phisically. you are doing good on this story so far, just remember that writing is ment to be a hobby, not a job. quality stuff always come from people who enjoy what they do. So take your time and you might be surprised what you can do.
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Reviewed By: Megz (the real one) On: June 20, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it!. I think Inuyasha should have been alive but the choice is yours not mine.
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: June 19, 2005 20:31 CDT
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Your formatting needs serious work, everything is all smashed together. Please fix this. I really like this story, but it's very hard to read like it is.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 13:51 CST
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Um, wait, i'm confused, how can Sesshomaru and the dog demon chick comunicate? I mean if demons, or dog demons could speak his language then why didn't the evil dude who tortured my Miru just grab some misalaniuse demon and forces them to talk to him? It would have been a lot esier wouldn't it? So confused!
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Reviewed By: Hun Wu On: March 02, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story Hoping to See More of It
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Reviewed By: Megz On: February 05, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and can't wait for the rest.
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Reviewed By: turtlerad17 On: October 29, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an original fic, looks good, update soon
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Reviewed By: hengenjizai On: September 29, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting concept, I've always liked the whole 'sco-fi' thing, due to my extreme nerdyness. For a fanfiction.net fic(AKA The Pit of Voles), this would have been very well written. As it was, it's got decent grammar but there were several things that just stuck me as off. Grammar wise, and all. Overall, I'd say this is an excellent fanfic, but would be made even better(and more easily understood) by getting a beta. ^.^ -Piroko
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