| "_Teamwork_" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 18:19 CST
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I LOVE KAKASHI:D that was great...oh boy oh boy oh boy....
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 17:58 CST
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OUCH that's a harsh way of learning something...
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 17:20 CST
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interesting...very intersting...how did the sensei's find out???
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Title: threesome?
Reviewed By: dinkscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you already know i love it. so just a thought: with kyuubi there, and with his own distinct (from naruto) personality and mind, isn't this more accurately a foursome?
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Reviewed By: Akaimizu On: February 19, 2005 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when will you write the other chapter??? damn I'm anxious!!!! please please please!!!! update soon!!!!!!! I love this fic!!! I see everyday if has come the next chap....I really, REALLY wanna read it....onegai shimasu!!!! :(
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Title: Fairia13 / Fairia13@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Fairia13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait to read the conclusion...LoL. Boy or girl? Sasuke's or Naruto's? Do you already have it thought up, or are you still going? I vote fraternal twins for Sasuke; one boy, on girl, with black hair and green eyes.... Please update soon! hÌDci
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Reviewed By: YamiB. On: February 01, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. Definetly the best one I've read with multiple partners. Probally one of the best I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Akaimizu On: January 31, 2005 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooooooooooooooove this fic =D I love the three of them together, I love the threesome fics and all...jejeje I mean....I like the sasusaku pairing and sasunaru, but it's far more interesting the sasusakunaru :D I'm such a pervert....anyhow, I like your story, is following the characters personality very right, just keep doing that, because I HATE the OCC or OC....whatever....pretty good work congratulations =D PD: pleaaaaaaaase write another fic of sasusakunaru....not now....but in the future....;)
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I LOVE THE ENDING TO THIS CHAPTER. I really love this story its the best and actually only SxSxN Ive ever read. At least that I can think of. Please you have got to update sooner. I love this so much, Keep up the good work...Yeah I have no life, so sue me.
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Reviewed By: joann On: January 30, 2005 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please!!!
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Title: omfg!!
Reviewed By: rhi-chann On: January 22, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE LIKE...UBERLY SOON ;__; ONNEGAIII ;_________; updattteeeee upppdatteeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: :P On: November 21, 2004 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry with a new chapter soon! it was GREAT! I LOVE THE PAIRINGS!!! cant wait to see them all together agian =]
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a fucking awesome story. excuse my language but it was amazing i just couldn't stop reading it and then you go and end at a cliffy. please i beg *gets on hands and knees* UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. Anways yeah pleae just update as soon as you can. Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 03:57 CST
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Wow. Great fic. I wasn't quite sure what kind of story I would get just based on the summary. It looked to me to be pwp. But I was proven wrong and I greatly happy for that. This story is really one of its kind. That have stories where Naruto hooks with a girl and they have kids, but if you think about it, the village wouldn't be too happy that he is reproducing. This seems more grounded in reality then other stories. If Naruto's youkai acted like you have put in the story, then this could really happen. Love the story. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:32 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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