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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:31 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:31 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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Reviewed By: Evertide [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too much. I knew that I'd be hooked when I read the first chapter. The action scenes were awesome. The characters were portrayed very well. And I thought it got pretty funny at times. But I think my favorite parts are when Kyuubi is involved, either in conversation with Naruto or when being described. I hope we haven't heard the last of him, which I doubt, considering the influence he has on Naruto. Like in the anime, he may seldom play a direct part either through Naruto or personally (well...as personally as he gets. Oh, and I'm up to ep. 104, so this is as far as I know), but when he does, there's no mistaking it. I can't wait for this fic to continue.
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Tiamat On: October 21, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very...well written. I was wondering what the Kitsune was going to say about the baby and Sakura's choice if she wants to abort it. It was an interesting monologue to read. The Kitsune has some very interesting thougths. ^__^ I liked the reactions that you gave the characters, Sakura's in pecturalur. I hope she keeps the baby. It would be very interesting to see Naruto/Kitsune to act out the father roll, especally Kitsune (okay so I can't spell his other name. :P). Great job with this chapter and update soon!!! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: fjhjhfjf On: October 21, 2004 16:35 CDT
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Great chapter
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: October 21, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I hope you keep writing. and, although I totally understand Sakura's point of view I kinda hope she decides to keep it anyway. and I love the way Sasuke protects Naruto. I hope Naruto starts to pay a little attention to him as well, since most of it is centered on Sakura right now. well, I'll be waiting for the next update, hope its soon! Later!
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Reviewed By: RandomCat On: October 13, 2004 00:14 CDT
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~Sqeee!~ I can't wait to read more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Tiamat On: October 12, 2004 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ This is great! I'm so happy that you updated. I like this ...er...pairing? Threesome? Whatever it is, it really works here. Great job!
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Reviewed By: dinkscythe On: October 12, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this to ittle bits when it seemed to be a oneshot (thrilled to the characterizations, ate up all the sappy team-supportiveness, leched on the pervy after-3some-smexness), but i'm all happy and astonished at what you've added in the second part. can't wait to see how this pans out!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! I love all the twists your giving it. ^_^ Great job! So will Sakura keep her baby? What is Naruto going to do since he overheard them? Will Sasuke play it up to pregent women are always crazy? Please please update!!
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Reviewed By: flyingwind On: October 04, 2004 22:34 CDT
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hm... perhaps it's not Naruto's and it's Sasuke's?
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Reviewed By: fjhjhfjf On: October 04, 2004 01:38 CDT
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Looking forward to more
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, It took so fucking long for you to review this and I love this so much. Oh man I cant wait for the next chapter, please hurry up and update. I love this. PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!
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Title: *cry*
Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG how can you just stop there!!!!!!!!! *gerrrrrrrr* lol jk love it and have to find out what happens next. So fair this is the best story I have ever read :D but it will suck it you don't up date! A.K.A. UP DATE!!!!!!!!!!!! please??? Poor Naruto, and Sakura. But manly Naruto. And who would have guessed that Sasuke could be all.......well pour out his emotions like that. Well what I'm trying to say is IT'S SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now what do you do.......... thats right you up date. good writer!!! (I'm not crazy........much) :D
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. hhmmm...bite marks mean that Sakura and Sasuke belong to Naruto now, right? Kinky. Love the way you protrayed the emotion that they felt. ^.^ Great job!
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