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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, It took so fucking long for you to review this and I love this so much. Oh man I cant wait for the next chapter, please hurry up and update. I love this. PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!
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Title: *cry*
Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG how can you just stop there!!!!!!!!! *gerrrrrrrr* lol jk love it and have to find out what happens next. So fair this is the best story I have ever read :D but it will suck it you don't up date! A.K.A. UP DATE!!!!!!!!!!!! please??? Poor Naruto, and Sakura. But manly Naruto. And who would have guessed that Sasuke could be all.......well pour out his emotions like that. Well what I'm trying to say is IT'S SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now what do you do.......... thats right you up date. good writer!!! (I'm not crazy........much) :D
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. hhmmm...bite marks mean that Sakura and Sasuke belong to Naruto now, right? Kinky. Love the way you protrayed the emotion that they felt. ^.^ Great job!
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