| "_Teamwork_" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a fucking awesome story. excuse my language but it was amazing i just couldn't stop reading it and then you go and end at a cliffy. please i beg *gets on hands and knees* UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. Anways yeah pleae just update as soon as you can. Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 03:57 CST
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Wow. Great fic. I wasn't quite sure what kind of story I would get just based on the summary. It looked to me to be pwp. But I was proven wrong and I greatly happy for that. This story is really one of its kind. That have stories where Naruto hooks with a girl and they have kids, but if you think about it, the village wouldn't be too happy that he is reproducing. This seems more grounded in reality then other stories. If Naruto's youkai acted like you have put in the story, then this could really happen. Love the story. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:32 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:31 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 09, 2004 23:31 CST
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I've enjyed reading this story. I look forward to seeing how it will end.
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Reviewed By: Evertide [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too much. I knew that I'd be hooked when I read the first chapter. The action scenes were awesome. The characters were portrayed very well. And I thought it got pretty funny at times. But I think my favorite parts are when Kyuubi is involved, either in conversation with Naruto or when being described. I hope we haven't heard the last of him, which I doubt, considering the influence he has on Naruto. Like in the anime, he may seldom play a direct part either through Naruto or personally (well...as personally as he gets. Oh, and I'm up to ep. 104, so this is as far as I know), but when he does, there's no mistaking it. I can't wait for this fic to continue.
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Tiamat On: October 21, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very...well written. I was wondering what the Kitsune was going to say about the baby and Sakura's choice if she wants to abort it. It was an interesting monologue to read. The Kitsune has some very interesting thougths. ^__^ I liked the reactions that you gave the characters, Sakura's in pecturalur. I hope she keeps the baby. It would be very interesting to see Naruto/Kitsune to act out the father roll, especally Kitsune (okay so I can't spell his other name. :P). Great job with this chapter and update soon!!! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: fjhjhfjf On: October 21, 2004 16:35 CDT
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Great chapter
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: October 21, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I hope you keep writing. and, although I totally understand Sakura's point of view I kinda hope she decides to keep it anyway. and I love the way Sasuke protects Naruto. I hope Naruto starts to pay a little attention to him as well, since most of it is centered on Sakura right now. well, I'll be waiting for the next update, hope its soon! Later!
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Reviewed By: RandomCat On: October 13, 2004 00:14 CDT
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~Sqeee!~ I can't wait to read more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Tiamat On: October 12, 2004 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ This is great! I'm so happy that you updated. I like this ...er...pairing? Threesome? Whatever it is, it really works here. Great job!
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Reviewed By: dinkscythe On: October 12, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this to ittle bits when it seemed to be a oneshot (thrilled to the characterizations, ate up all the sappy team-supportiveness, leched on the pervy after-3some-smexness), but i'm all happy and astonished at what you've added in the second part. can't wait to see how this pans out!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! I love all the twists your giving it. ^_^ Great job! So will Sakura keep her baby? What is Naruto going to do since he overheard them? Will Sasuke play it up to pregent women are always crazy? Please please update!!
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Reviewed By: flyingwind On: October 04, 2004 22:34 CDT
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hm... perhaps it's not Naruto's and it's Sasuke's?
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Reviewed By: fjhjhfjf On: October 04, 2004 01:38 CDT
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Looking forward to more
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