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Reviewed By: Syrus On: December 19, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, interesting story plot. Although that thing about Sasuke's house being small; It isn't. He lives in the Uchiha estate. It's a huge feudal-style mansion (palace) with a large mini-villa. There is already a garden and a pond. (with those cool bamboo fountain things that fill with water then tip over and spill it out) watch the anime episodes where Naruto and Sasuke fight at the vally of the End and beat the living shit out of eachother. The first one or two of the sequence are about Sasuke's childhood told in flachback. Around #129 on animefever.org Sasuke's house is tight! Anyway, keep up the good story writing.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: Zadya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining fiction, nice work out of character personalities! I really liked the pairing and dialogues.
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Title: Nice Work!
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not normally a yoai, threesome, or Naruto reader, but I honestly loved reading this story. Very nice job on not using the 'heat' business to create a never-ending NC17 fest. ^_^; It had a very nice plot. The only 'complaint' I had, if you could call it that, was the use of a heat in the first place. Anime fans LOVE 'heats' for their hentai work, so it's very over-used, however, old cliches can be turned original if done properly, I know I LOVE taking an idea that's so overused most people groan when you mention it and twisting it into something completely different. I don't always succeed, but you definitely did here. It didn't drag out the story with long sex scenes, which is usually what the 'heat' is used for. Not that I mind steamy sex-scenes. ^_~ So awesome job, and keep writing!
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Title: Fair
Reviewed By: Ash_Night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a big fan of the switching every chapter thing, but over all, a pretty good fic.There are a few things that could be worked on, but the characters were, for the most part, believeably in character.The humor level was fair, so the whole thing wasn't a sappy blob, like many on here.Really good.
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Reviewed By: AshNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, but...where were the threesomes? oh well, i'll keep reading. This is a good pairing.
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Title: Why'd I give you a 9 out of 10...?
Reviewed By: Advanced_phish On: January 06, 2006 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably because it was 5AM...
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Reviewed By: Advanced_phish On: January 06, 2006 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really amazing. I sat up all night and read it. Good job.
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Title: naruto
Reviewed By: kouga On: October 30, 2005 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a good job. you put in the characters like in the books and tv shows.. i could see it in my mind *whoa* well good job!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: inulover33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hum what can I say...... I thought I would never like a fic like this!! But I must say it was not bad at all. I laughed a few times at it and it was really well written. You have an nack for writing fics...keep it up!!
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Title: kakarotkit@lj.com
Reviewed By: Kiyoshi Kitana On: September 22, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee, I liked this a lot. While I'm more of a yaoi fan, the way you presented this threesome to me made sense, and made me love them together. Though I'll probably never read NaruSaku or SasuSaku, I'll continue to search for NaruSasuSaku because of this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: jounin On: September 02, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the greatest fic i have ever read please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Chimera_Zero17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed each and every bit of it! You've written the best Naruto fic I have ever read. Please continue writing.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Meh_not_logged_in On: August 22, 2005 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME! Please write more fanfics like that^^ *clings to leg* PULEASE!
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Reviewed By: Wobbly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Such a great story! MY HEART ACHES WITH DESIRE FOR MORE! ^^ That's all I can say....*ashamed* cause I'm to lazy to write details of what I liked...=P But your story is really filling up some space in my heart ;) Keep up the good work!
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