Reviewed By: Kelly Bean On: September 14, 2004 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
A one shot!!!! I think that's a great beginning to a mulit chapter fic. I guess I liked everything but the end...when Inu's still thinking about becoming a full demon. I don't want to critisize too much, I think it might have been a little better if maybe he was beginning to show more signs of changing his mind. Or maybe having him go into more detail about how being a full demon would change his relationship with Kagome. I don't know...just a suggestion. Anyways, you did an excellent job of keeping the 2 in character and I really like the reference to the fact that Kikyo never saw him in his human state. If you plan on writing a sequel to this "so-called" one shot, then email me, cause I'd like to read it (kelbean69@hotmail.com)
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