| "A Different Kind of Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:40 CST
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actually, in a way this story could work. Nabiki and Kasumi would probably make the horde stop by doubling or tripling their medical bills, and would get some of them out of the way. On the other hand, they'd want Akane to have as close to a normal life as possible, so she didn't feel alienated and alone. Neh, that's my interpretation. Still, a story liek this will explain things a lot better, thoguh japan is mostly a bunch of fucking pervs. Neh. Write more, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Shadowbakasama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 15:03 CDT
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A nice angsty one-shot. It seems pretty AU, and would make the whole Tendo family way OOC. Kasumi and Nabiki would have never pushed the engagement onto Akane with a past like this. Also Soun would have quietly excluded Akane from the choices since she may not be able to have children, and has enough boy trouble already. Of course Nabiki would be making life Hell for those boys bothering her poor little sister.
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Reviewed By: Otakufanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 06:53 CDT
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the most angast filled fic i have read.Ouch but a good ending.
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Reviewed By: cgrosch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is disturbing, and just plain awful. Not to be mean, but why would you even think of this story to be good to write? I think you need to seek professional help for even having these type of ideas.
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