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Reviewed By: Catherine On: July 09, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. Kami-sama I can't stop crying, it was so sad. It was beautiful especially the endind. Arigato
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a sad but beautifully writen story. Thank you for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Siri On: November 06, 2004 08:43 CST
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What's with all these deathfics that have come out since episode 162? Geez. I know in Eastern mythology in which youkai exists, there are various things that can extend the life and youth of humans. Sess has risked himself to save Rin in the series. It doesn't make sense that he would let Rin die of old age while doing nothing about it.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Aki_Kokoro [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying* I love it!! It's a very good one-shot. I just like crying too, so don't mind me crying! ^^ And the ending was great! I loved it all! ^^ thank you for writing it!
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Reviewed By: Inubabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 01:23 CDT
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Wow...yet another awesome fic. Very, very well written and a good story at that. (And I'm not a big fan of angst) Very well written! I almost cried when Rin died. It was very sad. But I liked how you tied in the relative and her passing to make it seem that she died so he would meet Michi. Anyway...awesome fic. Keep up the good work. ~~Inubabe
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Title: beautiful really
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I ever login?) On: September 15, 2004 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really this was so good, I love fic's where they tell you how it ends with Rin and Sesshy and where Rin die's. But the part where Michi came was so cute, the fact that Rin would never leave him truly alone was real beautiful. I think you did a really good job, and I sure hope you write more in the future. You're talented for putting things down. Not to fast, or to dry, you put it down real good. Keep up the good work, I truly think this is the best Rin/Sesshy with a sad ending ever. Well it's not completely sad, but it does tells Rin's end. And you made the facts hard about Rin's husband hitting her, in that time it was terrible if your woman went to meet another man. Still what a bastard to hit her so she couldn't move. I think that part was real good. Finally not a story that goes like: and she was happy all her live till she died. I'm not just saying this stuff just to seem nice, I mean if I think that something was wrong I would tell ya I mean that's what's reviews are for right?! To tell if something is good or bad. Okay but I'm making this review far to long ^^ and I'm making a lot of spelling mistakes, but as long as you get my drift I'm okay with it haha. Beautiful fic again! K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was well written. It was creative and had a lot of originality. I love the way it ended. The characters seem to stay in character but with a little bit of a twist. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Lira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely beautiful
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