| "Two Birds With One Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 18:35 CDT
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PLEASE say that you're going to continue this! It's much too funny for you to stop.
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 15:07 CDT
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Very funny story, will Kags pmsing affect Inu too much?
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Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: October 10, 2004 17:09 CDT
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good!!!!!! keep on writing... and be carefull about puctuation and spelling... hey i can't spell either!!! really good plot! keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:02 CDT
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YES!!! AN UPDATE!! Oh, and I have found out that gnomes don't like to be hit... They stalked me too, until my friend started dating Random Gnome, their leader. XD But, if that isn't an option, use this. **hands Mistress Author Who Should Update More (XD) some GnomeAway** It really works. And as for the smurfs, just threaten to step on them. JA NE!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 08, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just saw ch.8, holy shit that was funny! LOL you gotta keep it up, this is too damn funny but could you add some fluffy? I love fluff! FLUFF -Kitsu
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 15:46 CDT
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SUPER AWESOME STORY!!!! Ok, I get it now! I still think that he should SENSE what she feels, but I can live with it the way it is! ^.^ SRY I HAVE TO GO JA NE!!!
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Title: Feel!-greatstory
Reviewed By: princessporkina On: September 28, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INuyasha should feel!!!!!! Great story-keep it coming! LIke it lots! bwahahaha- the one and only, princess porkina
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 12:29 CDT
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OH! I think Inuyasha should SENSE what she feels, because otherwise he wouldn't have any emotions of his own, he would always have to be in the same mood as Kagome... And then, well, Inuyasha just wouldn't be Inuyasha! ^^ Please update soon! I think you should include Sesshoumaru... Please? He rocks! Oh, and you spell Sango's name S-A-N-G-O. Not S-O-N-G-O. Get it? ^^ I'll be back when you update!!!! JA NE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:20 CDT
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hey, i don't rate ppl because...idn i just don't lol n.e.wayz i think this story is very interesting! i have never read one such as this before. i hope that u will update soon because i really want to see how everyone handles everything. so..inuyasha can feel what Kagome feels? is that right? lol this is going to be great! hahaha n.e.wayz ur a great writer and i hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 18:57 CDT
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Thanks for fixing it! Please continue. :)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 19:06 CDT
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I might try and read this story if you fix the formating in the first few chapters. The first word of every paragragh is missing and the paragraphs are shoved together. Please try and fix it.
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