| "Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: paniwi. On: February 20, 2005 15:22 CST
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...well, this was something else, I wanted to call it a day somewhere in the middle but I just couldn't stop, I had to know how it ended, extremely good. Nice insight you have there on love and lust, I absolutely loved it. You've got great writing skills. Especcially the ending was very good. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 03:39 CST
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Hmm... Well this was certainly an interesting insight on Lust and love... It was also a very insightful look into the mind of one who cheats on theiur partner.... Over all, I'd say it wasn't that bad.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: September 19, 2004 18:19 CDT
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Interesting, very interesting. Well written too. More details might've been nice, but that's ok, it's still good. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Title: Great Fic!!
Reviewed By: VampiricEssence [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic!Sucks that Ryou cheated on Marik.*Tear*Well, i love this fic.I really enjoyed it.It was interesting unlike some fics I've read.Well, if you write another fic let me know.I would love to read more of your fics.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this was really great!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo this is soo cool!!! can u make a little continuation??? that would be sooo cool!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: September 15, 2004 15:26 CDT
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I think this was a good story, but you can flesh it out a bit. This was really good and could be taken as a really good, detailed outline. Continue! It's really good.
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