| "ForestFire: Goshinboku no Sekkusu" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 07:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Really, really hot... wow, this room now is quite warm... I love it!! Could you write another lemon in which the make love puppy-style at the goshinboku? *_*
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Title: ho
Reviewed By: darkmoongoddess27 On: October 12, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it rocks my socks! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: September 16, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ppl read and they dont review... bt this is a good chpter so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love it when kag says sit while she and inu are screwing eachother
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_...blank_Hanyou On: September 15, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Down play the orgasitc screeches just a tad next tiome ok? Otherwise, it's pretty good, wouldn't mind getting whomped like that by Inuyasha *grins* ' Here're some spelling errors and corrections I found: Goshinbuko: Nope, close but no ramen *laughs* Correct Spelling: Goshinboku
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