| "This Little Game" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: MewHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. I was trying so hard not to laugh in the middle of class while reading it. It was so hilarious. I'm not a morning person either
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Reviewed By: sasukelover132 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!1! its realy realy realy realy realy realy good! plz update very very very very very very soon!!! PPPLLLZZZZZZ!!!!
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Reviewed By: sasukelover132 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 12:02 CST
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Love your fic! its realy good! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:58 CDT
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You're writing style is great and the story is actually interesting. Please don't give up and continue writing. You're very good!
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Reviewed By: (Jisatsu) On: September 06, 2005 16:25 CDT
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Naaa, minna-saaan! XD Please do continue. Your fic is one of the only self-insertions that isn't retarded.
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Title: Continue, ne?
Reviewed By: Y-san On: November 28, 2004 08:26 CST
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Hai, hai, hai! Really good fanfic. Continue, continue... ^_^
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Title: Ohayo gozaimasu!
Reviewed By: Yuriko-chan On: November 28, 2004 08:25 CST
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I'm not japanese, but maybe I'm just obsessed, because I understood everything you were saying. That's what I like about your writing style. I'll keep this short: Continue!
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Reviewed By: silver dark rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon that was great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 15:14 CDT
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^^ You are really good at this! I love your writing style! I should go read your other ones then, ne? I like How you put Shikamaru in! (Second favorite character[I think Kakashi wins it for me ^~]) I''l keep on reviewing this if you keep writing and posting it! Please update it again soon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Pancakes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i REALLY like this story! i shall put it in my favorites! *click click* anyway, i'm kinda putting myself in as the main character... BECAUSE I'M USED TO IT! =3 reading all those self insertion fics is getting me drunk on being in the story... oh, and it's entirely possible to know you're in a dream! i was experimenting once, and kept trying to remember to realize i was actually in a dream, and one night, i remembered! ^.^ i shouted to myself to wake up, and i became all pissed at myself because it was like 3 something in the morning... but i have a mental capacity higher than most people my age, and even older, so... whatever. i hate being smart -.- anyway, UPDATE SOOOOOOONN!! ===Bloody===
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Reviewed By: Mize On: October 08, 2004 21:27 CDT
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i really like this story...keep up the good work...and by the way, you might have gotten Himura from Rorouni Kenshin...you know...Himura Kenshin? yeah...^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuro Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is pretty cool so far, and as for the dream thing. It's possible to know your dreaming and actually be in pain, and wake up with bruisis.(sorry I forget how to spell it, lol) I know this cause its happened to me alot. Sometimes its hard to tell if your dreaming or if your in realitly, I swear my life is one big dream.. * excuse me if I sound mean, I actually have pure intentions, I like this fic alot.* The fighting in the beginning of the story was great, it was a neat intro. Please update soon, and ps. The only thing I saw wrong with the story was that it was a little too short. Keep up the good work!
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