Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 16:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Lovely thoughts on Kohaku! He's quite an overlooked character, isn't he? Although short, your fic is very direct and to the point. It strikes me almost more like a free-form poem than a 'story', not that it's a bad thing! I enjoyed reading it! It's obvious you put a lot of thought and effort into this fic, and it shows! Thanks for sharing it with us! Sueric
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