| "Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:52 CDT
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Loved it! U did a great job on this! =] r4k
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! that was really awsome! the story was interesting, ther characters believeable, and the ending powerful. I about died of laughter when Naraku called IOnu/Kag/Kikyo the three studges lol. This was very well done and I truely thank you for shairing it with the public. Excelent job this was a hard story to stop reading at anytime (though life demanded I do just that on occasion ^^) thank you for sharing ^^
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Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: August 23, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I hope you continue with writing more stories. And yes, I have read all333 pages, laughed, cried, and looked like an idiot on whatever public computer I just happen to be using at the time. I am a mm.org member, just not signed in, so it won't let me use my name, KuraiTenshi. Keep up the great work! Savanna
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 17:31 CDT
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I have truly enjoyed your AU. I enjoyed the humor, and the fluff, and action. Well done!Congratulations on finishing it!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to let you know that i am fully enjoying this fic. i am only on chap. 5, but i thought it would be appropriate to review and say how much i love it. from the other reviews, i'm guessing you're almost finished with the story. i hope i can finish reading soon so that i'm caught up with everyone else. then again, i want the story to last. : ) i promise to review again when i've done so. thanx.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:41 CDT
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Congrads! Your story is spectacular. I have really enjoyed it. This chapter was very touching and is a great pre-ending. I can't wait for the epiloge. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
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Reviewed By: ModTiranth On: August 13, 2005 20:09 CDT
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Congratulations Trusuprise! Your story Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land has been nominated for Best Action Adventure of theSecond Quarter 2005 by the Inuyasha Fanfiction Guild. To qualify for this honor, your story needs to have had a chapter posted during April-June, been recommended by one of our members and seconded by another. Voting by our members will take place starting on August 14. If your story places among the top three, you can expect to hear notification soon after this date. If you wish to see what other stories have been nominated, you can check out the current list of nominees at http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/kJf-QujDlUfAnIp_pQXDQWtawv8x6RSs6N8sssDCrEJ77I 7nsHJr9N9G4M00winu1sRPdShtbsxvwE7s6V-a/2ndQuarter2005.html. The Inuyasha Fanfiction Guild is a Yahoo! Group dedicated to recognizing outstanding fanfiction for Rumiko Takahashi's Inuyasha through quarterly and annual awards, and the creation and management of a fanfiction database to aid the discriminating reader in finding the best fanfiction. We have been awarding stories since 2002, and with more than 900 members, we rate stories in sixteen different categories. We hold private voting for our members, who judge stories using a critical eye. This is not a popularity contest, but one based on technical and stylistic achievement. We welcome you to learn more of our group at: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/. Be advised that you may receive more of
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 11:06 CDT
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This has been wonderful. The jewel wish was inspired. I can't wait to see how you'll wrap it up for the pack.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this has really been a wonderful experience, reading your beautiful masterpiece here! :D I loved the final battle with Naraku and how she made that selfless wish to repair damage by Naraku! Thank you for writing this! The description and your writing are beautiful and it has been wonderful enjoying this! :D I was wondering, are you planning on taking a break after you finish this fic or do you have another one in mind? It would really be a shame if your talents weren't continued, because you really are a fabulous writer, and your plots are wonderful! Well, keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what's in store next! ^_^ I'll be waiting patiently for a new update so until then, take care!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 21:54 CDT
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Holy crap! I was totally sweating bullets there! LOVED it. Great action scene. I can't believe that everyone fell though; I hope Sess can be okay and bring them back or something. I love how you made Naraku fall from his own tricks…cocky little thing. I am totally psyched and ready to find out what happens. Too excited to even be sad that it is almost over...that will come later. Thanks again for sharing this awesome story with everyone!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 11, 2005 20:02 CDT
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Well, I'm glad that Naraku is dead, but man, what a price to pay! I'll wait ... edge of my seat - for what happens next.
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Reviewed By: The Purple Ghost On: July 11, 2005 01:19 CDT
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It's time for another late night review... At first I was worried that you might be getting KAgo and Inu together to quickly (although I was enjoying every little bit of the fast journey) but my fears have been rested! Your pacing is great! My favorite like of all time, Sessho being glad that at least his brother was getting a little "somthing-something" I almost hyperventalated I laughed so hard...I could just...see..it...evern though per the anime and the manga Sessho would never dare sink low enough to think about his brothers sex life... But is just seemed to fit... And that slbow in the rib that Sessho gave him when he was "sugesting" the tour.... You have created one of the best stories I've read ina long time....for a while I was afraid that Inuyasha fanfiction had reached that point where nothing was original anymore...but you have revived my faith in the genre!!!! Thank you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Purple Ghost On: July 10, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome read! I really like the plot! I'd love to read more tonight, but I really need to get some sleep! I never leave reviews...cause I'm lazy like that, but I liked this story so much that I just had to leave feed back!
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Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: July 07, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: tiner On: June 29, 2005 01:11 CDT
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Wow, i really like your story. So far that is. I mean, after all it isn't over :P It's seriously one of the best fan fics that i've read.. and i read a lot of fanfics ^_^. well hope the next chapter is up soon. Again, good job.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:49 CDT
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Whoa, awesome chapter. The battle scene is great. Very descriptive and compelling. I totally was sweating it when Inuyasha was battling his own despair. The Kikyo scene was very compelling and I am not such a big fan of hers, but I really felt for her. It shows what a great writer you are if you can make me feel bad for her. I can't wait to see what happens; you have me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great climax. Great story. I have enjoyed it and I am sorry for not reviewing earlier. Your writing is wonderful, smooth and articulate. Very few grammar or spelling errors, a true work of art. Anyway, great chapter, it was worth the wait! Can't wait for the battle! Will Kagome make it in time? Will Kouga be allowed past the barrier? Will Onigumo fight with Naraku and keep him from corrupting the jewel? See you got me hanging off my seat!!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 11:35 CDT
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Jaken and Kouga are push overs - but for different reasons - LOL. I can't wait for Kagome to get there - she's going to kick some butt I'd bet! I am eargerly waiting for more - you have them all ready for battle - and I can hardly wait for it!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 08, 2005 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been pretty much reading your story straight through since yesterday! It's awsome! You have excellent plot ideas and everything is written perfectly, so that it easy to picture how everything is happening in my mind! You really have a knack for writing fanfiction and I have to say that I LOVE the length of your chapters! :) I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading! I found the whole soul-communication very original. I don't think I've ever heard of anyone ever using it. :) Very original! Anyway, please update when you can! Your writing is excellent!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:14 CST
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oh. my. god. this story rocks! ok ill be honest with you. ive seen the description of your story several times and brushed it off, but then i decided to give it a chance and i was blown away.this is amazingly original and very descriptive anf fulfilling. you really give substance in your chapters and dont leave readers hanging.i know you just updated today (yay!) but please update again soon . thank you for writing this, i really enjoy it.
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Title: chapter13
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 15:36 CST
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so interesting this new chapter! Another juicy Inu/Kag lemon.... and poor Souta! so in love but so unlucky! I also hope that the situation between Sesshoumaru and Kagura will improve... I like very much this couple. I'm happy you mentioned the Modena because I live in Modena! ^^ I was really excited when I saw that name for the car... ^^ In Modena are produced the Ferrari and the Maserati, but don't think that everyone here has a car like that... -____-
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 02, 2005 21:59 CST
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loved it, another great chapter. what's gonna happen now that naraku has the jewel?dun dun dun
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Reviewed By: Patchcat (not signed in, too lazy) On: March 02, 2005 17:25 CST
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I've enjoyed this story for a fairly good while and have found it to be a truly captivating piece. The plot is well thought out and engaging, the character interactions flow marvelously, and everything is very well-paced and natural. The only thing I found a problem with was in your most recent chapter, and it's not even really a problem, per se. This is what I found: Sesshomaru's sword is called Tensaiga, Inuyasha's sword is Tesseiga. You correctly identified Tensaiga a couple of times and then you didn't and it got a little confusing. I only point this out because I have enjoyed your work so very much, and I'm sure it was just an oversight -- especially considering how long your chapters are. Well, that's all I have to say for now. I look forward to your next update. Laters, Patch
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 02, 2005 15:51 CST
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Death, devastation, chaos - seems your work here is done!! A very full chapter - If Kaugra hadn't kept it a secret from Sess, then they probably could have saved Kanna - but alas - she wasn't thinking that far ahead. I look forward to your next chapter.
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