| "Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: November 24, 2004 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arrgh! I want to cry for her! Inu is such a butt! Great for building a good story though, ne? Keeps us waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: November 24, 2004 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, this the first time I'm reading yr story & great to say its truly amazing. I always like the pairing Inu/Kag. I hope Inu won't be an ass & he & Kagome can resolve their feelings quickly. Any fool can tell they love each other. Just take the chase , Inu & tell Kagome you wanna mate with her you baka you! Sigh ! I always get so immersed into the stories. So don't let Inu & Kag be unhappy hoping U will fix it by next chapter. But just to say I am rooting for U. Pls continue updating.
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Reviewed By: frostshake On: November 23, 2004 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is so good!! I can't believe Inuyasha said that, what an idiot. Oh well, I love your fic. Don't let the minimum number of reviews keep them from letting you update your story is awesome!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 20:51 CST
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You posted! You posted! I like some of the content changes you made compared to the version I read before... But I'm dying for the actual lemon!!! Me want more...me want more!! :)
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Reviewed By: Danziggy On: November 13, 2004 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is without question singular. Keep up the exceptional work.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. I really love is so far! This chapter was hot, that i can really say right now, except I hope you can update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:28 CST
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Hey there...it's me, szmadad! I finally have a pen name now that I've posted my own story at this site. I was so excited to get an alert about your update. I just love your writing...and this is a fun story to read. It was terribly nice of you to give Kouga some sense - he's realized that he's where in the running for Kag's affections. Now Naraku's deviousness has me wondering - is he going to try to use Kikyo to break Inu and Kag up? is he going to try and make Kags think that Inu cheated on her (the way he did with Kikyo)? Now if it's the latter...we all know that Kag would doubt Inu completely...after all, that's the big difference b/w her and Kikyo; Kags trusts Inu with all her heart. Hmm...this will be interesting. Of course, you're at my favorite part - the Inu-Kag LEMON (well, you know I'd be interested in that since my own story is pretty much an all out lemon with no plot). Of course, I'm assuming that it's an Inu-Kag lemon coming up. After all, it would be terribly mean for you to give us some lemonade for them and then bust out the lemon for some other couple! Congrats on showing your dog. As for Inuyasha and his Inu heritage. An akita would make the most sense...I just looked up a picture of one to be sure, and I have to agree with you on your assessment of the ears. :) Update soon! I want the LEMON!!
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! This is a really good and well written piece of fiction, I love the plot you have going on and really love how you show the relations between all of the characters. Most people only focaus on the couples and nothing between any one else other than to say that they are friends or that they are enemies... I really like what you've got going on here ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 07:18 CDT
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I've fixed the error, sorry about that.
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Reviewed By: erftrgwq On: September 27, 2004 16:42 CDT
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chapter 3 is the same as chapter 2 you story is very good but i was so lookin forward to the next chapter please fix asap
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Yesss...an update! Your writing is wonderful - you've got very clever descriptions and the diaogue is fun. Oh hell, I guess Kagome is who I'm getting a kick out of..she's a sassy chick, eh? .and to top it off, Inuyasha just has to swallow what she says for now. But I'm glad you're letting his natural surliness come through..after all, that's what Kagome will fall for...not some smarmy charmer. Speaking of which, please tell me that Kagome is NOT attracted to Kouga beyond "oh cute youkai"....I mean, in my twisted mind...Inu-Kag's chemisty and mutual attraction can't be beat. I'd really hate for her to trying to choose between Inu and the wolf. It's so obvious to me - hottie hanyou all the way!! I have no clue why I'm the only one reviewing your story...but people will catch on soon, I'm sure.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 16:29 CDT
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Ok,,,I had to go back to reread the chapter to figure out how Kagome and Kikyo are related. Cousins, eh? Would Kagome know about the relationship b/w Inuyasha and Kikyo...being that it took place only 6 years ago? Have Kagome and Kikyo been in contact at all...I almost would've thought Naraku would've had Kikyo try to talk Kagome into listening to Naraku. Y'know the whole "get a family member to show how good the deal is" Do the youkai generally walk around freely amongst humans? Or do they all have a concealing spell of some sort? Looking forward to Inu and Kag meeting and sparks flying (I LOVE that couple)
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