Reviewed By: Sky King Haruka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like what you have written so far, it seems this fic is going to be quite interesting. I saw you named Grand Prairie and Ashcroft, it is a complete 360 change in scenery; I live in Dallas and I once lived in Grand Prairie, have you lived there? Aside from that I like the originality of the story and your description of things. Personally the only thing I see you need to work on is the grammar part along with the structure of it like paragraphs, etc. That's the only thing I see that needs attention. Other than that I love it and I hope you update soon so I can see what happens next.
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